Inactive User Posted April 10, 2016 Report Share Posted April 10, 2016 Great chapter It's really horrible that Phoebe is still torturing Kyle! Liked the flashback Update soon please xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted April 10, 2016 Report Share Posted April 10, 2016 Great chapter Kyle shouldn't of spoken to Josh and Evie like that. Poor Kyle still being tormented by Phoebe and its affecting his relationship with Tamara. I look forward to more Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KittCatt Posted April 10, 2016 Report Share Posted April 10, 2016 Great Chapter! Oh dear, it looks like their is big trouble ahead for Tamara and Kyle, as well as Josh and Evie. Poor Kyle, with Phoebe terrorizing him and everything else going on he was bound to explode eventually- verbally and physically. Now he has scared Tamara after yelling at Josh. He and Evie need to work out a way to stop the deal- Josh is seemingly oblivious to Evie's discomfort and Tamara just wants the money. The begining with Kyle sewing his wound back together was slightly disturbing... As is Phoebe still wanting to kiss him Update soon, i look forward to more 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted April 11, 2016 Report Share Posted April 11, 2016 Great chapter Whoa! Kyle was so out of line there when he spoke to Josh and Evelyn like that So sad that Kyle and Tamara's relationship is getting affected because of Phoebe's ghost terroizing him Update soon please xx 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KittCatt Posted April 11, 2016 Report Share Posted April 11, 2016 Great Chapter Loved the flashback at the start. Really showed the differences between Phoebe as she was back then and ghost Phoebe. And Kyle see's it too but still can't stop seeing her. Creepy Phoebe watching him as he showered Andy found out just how badly Kyle's body is doing. Good that he called Nate but i think he needs someone with more expertise. Hopefully Kyle will be honest and confront his demons sooner rather than later. Poor Kyle.. Tamara and the kids are still gone I look forward to more 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted April 12, 2016 Report Share Posted April 12, 2016 Great chapter loved the flashback at the start. Creepy that Phoebe was watching Kyle in the shower. its good Andy called Nate. I look forward to more Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted April 12, 2016 Report Share Posted April 12, 2016 (edited) Great chapter Liked the flashback at the beginning Ohhh really creeppyyy that Phoebe was watching Kyle in the shower Glad Andy called Nate Update soon please xx Edited April 12, 2016 by ~JarlieFanEver~ 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Suzza101 Posted April 12, 2016 Report Share Posted April 12, 2016 Great Chapter Really creepy with Phoebe watching Kyle in the shower Glad Andy told Nate and that he's there for Kyle Update soon please 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted April 12, 2016 Report Share Posted April 12, 2016 Great chapter Hmm so Andy can see Phoebe's ghost now too I wonder what she's up too. Liked the chat between Tamara and Kat. I look forward to more update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted April 13, 2016 Report Share Posted April 13, 2016 Awesome chapter, Ludub I am really enjoying this fanfiction so far Interesting that Andy can see Phoebe's ghost too... Loved the chat between Kat and Tamara Looking forwards to the next chapter Xxx 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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