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Great Chapter!

I'm glad the nerve block helped Kyle live like a normal father for a few days. Also like the fact that Kyle knows he needs to take his medication at specific times so he won't be tempted to start taking more. Sad that he has had thoughts about ending all the pain but it's understandable. Glad he is staying on track for the his family.

Phoebe's back but she's not the same, angry at him for forgetting about her. Poor Kyle. I wonder how he's going to explain this now.:unsure:

I look forward to more, update soon :P

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Great chapter 

poor Kyle being terrorised by Phoebe's ghost. I hope Kyle will realise all the horrible things she's saying aren't true.

I look forward to more 

Update again soon :)

 

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Great Chapter!

Poor Kyle having sepsis. And to help him get through it there's Phoebe :unsure:. I like how you have written the transition from Phoebe being nice and something Kyle needed to something Kyle is now terrorized from. Great work.

I also understand that Kyle is scared to tell the entire truth regarding seeing Phoebe, but i don't know how well he is going to cope if she continues to appear like this. 

Update soon :P

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Great chapter

poor Kyle still being terrosied by Phoebe's ghost.

Glad Kyle is getting help.

Whoa at the end of the chapter 

I look forward to more

Update again soon :)

 

 

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Great Chapter!

Really enjoying the development of Phoebe and her terrorizing Kyle. It's very interesting to read, well done! Glad Kyle felt safe enough to tell his doctor and am glad he came out of that more hopeful. Phoebe though...  :unsure: She blames Kyle for her being dead, which makes sense seeing as Kyle probably blames himself too, at least on some level, conscious or unconscious even though it is no one but Tank's fault. 

Nice ending. Horrible that Tamara had to see that. Hope he is okay

I look forward to more :P

 

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