Guest Posted February 20, 2016 Report Share Posted February 20, 2016 Great chapter i'm glad Tamara tried to comfort Josh. I look forward to more Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Suzza101 Posted February 20, 2016 Report Share Posted February 20, 2016 Great chapter I love it so cute the reunion between Kyle and Tamara. Glad Tamara tried to comfort Josh 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KittCatt Posted February 20, 2016 Report Share Posted February 20, 2016 Great Chapter Loved the reunion between Tamara and Kyle! Glad they can easily reignite their friendship. Hope to see more of this. Understandable Josh is easily panicked and doesn't want to be comforted by his girlfriend. Hope Evie's jealousy of Tamara's ability to provide some sort of comfort doesn't make things worse but i get why she is concerned. Completely in character. Also love how you have understood Josh's character as he is going through this- he needs support and comfort but people touching him and feeling sorry for him makes him even more uncomfortable. Hard situation for everyone involved. Look forward to more, update soon 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted February 20, 2016 Report Share Posted February 20, 2016 Great chapter Loved the reunion between Kyle and Tamara Update soon please xx 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Suzza101 Posted February 20, 2016 Report Share Posted February 20, 2016 Love the update update again soon please ? 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted February 20, 2016 Report Share Posted February 20, 2016 Great chapter I feel sorry for Josh I got a bad feeling it's Tank who stared the fire to make everyone think Josh did it Update soon please xx 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted February 20, 2016 Report Share Posted February 20, 2016 Great chapter I have a feeling Tank might of started the fire and set Josh up. Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KittCatt Posted February 20, 2016 Report Share Posted February 20, 2016 Great Chapter Tank watching Evie and Josh sleep is really creepy. People really need to learn to lock their doors. Glad Evie's jealously didn't really cause problems. Quite the opposite actually.Like that you still include details about their intimate relationship even though their lives are a bit messed up right now. Glad Josh was able to go out into the water. Hate that everyone probably thinks he is crazy. Hate that Josh is actually starting to doubt himself aswell. Wish everyone would give him a bit more credit. Once again great writing, update soon 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted February 21, 2016 Report Share Posted February 21, 2016 Great chapter Liked the conversation between Mark and Josh Whoa! I wonder what is Tank going to do..?? Update soon please xx 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KittCatt Posted February 21, 2016 Report Share Posted February 21, 2016 Great chapter! Liked that Mark and Josh talked about everything that has happened. Glad he has a diagnosis and medication will help. But there are side effects and its not a quick fix. Loved how everyone was in fits of laughter because of Kyle. That was great and i think everyone needed it. Poor Josh thinking that he caused the fire himself. Don't think Evie should've left Josh alone. Creepy Tank is so very creepy. Wonder what exactly he has planned.. Look forward to more 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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