Bobby Forever Missed Posted March 2, 2016 Report Share Posted March 2, 2016 LOL Sally knows that communism is?? smart kid 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackpittorino Posted May 15, 2017 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2017 (edited) Chapter 3 Morning 7:40 am As Sally was getting her cereal she notices Steven is watching a Movie in the lounge room Sally then walks over to Steven Sally: What are you watching Steven? Steven: Bliss Sally: what's Bliss about? Steven: Bliss is about a guy named Harry Joy who has a near death experience and when he comes back things are not quite the same for Harry Joy Sally: why does Harry Joy's Car look squashed? Steven: Because an Elephant sat on it Sally then laughs Steven: I don't think you should watching this Movie with Me Sally because this Movie is Rated M Tom then walks in Tom: Steven what did I tell you about watching M Rated Movies when Sally is Around Sally: why are the Policemen beating up Mr. Joy Tom: Steven turn it off Now Steven: Sorry Tom My Mistake Steven turns offs the VHS Player and takes the Bliss Tape out and puts it back in its case Sally: Tom is it possible for an Elephant to sit on someone's Car? Tom: I guess so Sal just as long I hope it doesn't sit on my Car because I would have to pay a lot to get it replaced Sally then laughs Tom: Well I gotta go now and help Alf with putting up the new sign at the Surf Club bye Sal Sally: don't forget to say bye to Milko Tom: Don't worry Sal I was just about to bye to Milko aswell, Bye Milko Tom kisses Sally on the cheek then pats her on the head Tom: You kids be good. if Pippa is looking for me tell her that I'm at the Surf Club helping Alf putting up the new sign bye Sally: Bye End Of Chapter 3 Edited October 7, 2017 by Jackpittorino Made a bit of a typo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted May 16, 2017 Report Share Posted May 16, 2017 Great chapter Tom being protective of young Sally and not wanting her to watch a M rated movie with Steven. Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted May 16, 2017 Report Share Posted May 16, 2017 Liked this chapter Loved how Tom was so protective of Sally Update soon please xx 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackpittorino Posted September 25, 2018 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2018 (edited) New Chapters will be coming soon in October Edited September 30, 2018 by Jackpittorino I will continue writing the story in my spare time Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chair Posted October 3, 2018 Report Share Posted October 3, 2018 I've just read this to date and really enjoyed it. It's good to see your take on it @jackpittorino I look forward to reading more. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackpittorino Posted October 3, 2018 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2018 (edited) 11 hours ago, chair said: I've just read this to date and really enjoyed it. It's good to see your take on it @jackpittorino I look forward to reading more. I’m glad you enjoyed it I’m going to write a new fan fic soon because I’m not actually satisfied of how I started writing this fan fic. my new fan fic will be an improvement of this fan fic Edited October 3, 2018 by Jackpittorino To make my sentence more clear 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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