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Intriguing premise ………will be interesting to see where this goes !!!

LOVED this ……………

Oscar stared hard at her for a few moment.“Are my evil twin and the boyfriend in there?”
Maddy shifted awkwardly, embarrassed at how easily read she was.“That’s got nothing to do with it.”
“Look, come on.I’ll sit with you, we can even make jokes about how sickening they are.”
Maddy glared at him stubbornly.The last thing she needed was Oscar treating her like a charity case and taking away what little dignity she had left after being dumped, cheated on, used and impregnated… possibly not in that order.“I don’t want to.”

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Maddy running away is ironic ..........

and from the sound of the premise, i'm guessing this move won't turn out well.

Loved this .......

“I’m sorry to be such a burden.”Maddy’s tone was sarcastic, so much so that Roo didn’t realise she was only half-joking.

I'm not really a fan of Maddy, but am VERY intersted where you take this !!!!!

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