Inactive User Posted October 30, 2014 Report Share Posted October 30, 2014 Great start Update soon xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melbelle94 Posted October 30, 2014 Report Share Posted October 30, 2014 Great start! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted October 30, 2014 Report Share Posted October 30, 2014 Great start please continue update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chels24 Posted October 31, 2014 Report Share Posted October 31, 2014 (edited) I just wanted to take a quick opportunity to thank you for your positive reviews as this was my first attempt I was a little nervous, I should have the second chapter up later on today I just need to edit it a bit first, out of curiosity I have 2 possible ways I want this story to go I was just wondering which pairing you readers are more in favour of Leah/Zac or Leah/Vinnie? I just want to gauge reactions as I am relatively bias Edited October 31, 2014 by chels24 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QUIET ACHIEVER Posted October 31, 2014 Report Share Posted October 31, 2014 chels24, please make sure that you fill in the whole Index Form and don't leave anything out. I have edited your Index Form and added the BTTB Rating back into it. The Rating is necessary to be filled out, so please read the link and decide on a rating. If you have any questions or need help, please PM me as my role on the forum is to help members out therefore I am here to help. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chels24 Posted October 31, 2014 Report Share Posted October 31, 2014 chels24, please make sure that you fill in the whole Index Form and don't leave anything out. I have edited your Index Form and added the BTTB Rating back into it. The Rating is necessary to be filled out, so please read the link and decide on a rating. If you have any questions or need help, please PM me as my role on the forum is to help members out therefore I am here to help. thank you I have finally got it right now Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted October 31, 2014 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2014 Great chapter I think this is really good Please update soon xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted October 31, 2014 Report Share Posted October 31, 2014 Great chapter I agree with Sarah ^ Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QUIET ACHIEVER Posted November 1, 2014 Report Share Posted November 1, 2014 An interesting fiction but it would be much better if one would space their fiction out a bit more. Lumping a whole fiction together makes it very hard for one to concentrate on the storyline when one constantly looks at the way it is written. My advice would be to look at other people's fictions (the written ones not the ones that are written in script format) and see how they use space to their advantage. Alternatively, pick up any book/novel - either online or one that you can hold in your hand (a paperback or hard cover copy) and look at how it is set out. I hope that that will give you some inspiration when writing your next chapters. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted November 5, 2014 Author Report Share Posted November 5, 2014 Great chapter Liked the chat between Jett and VJ Update soon please xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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