Guest Posted September 8, 2014 Report Share Posted September 8, 2014 Great three chapters I look forward to more update again soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
christine king Posted September 9, 2014 Report Share Posted September 9, 2014 Chapter 9 Casey arrives at the house and he finds Kyle and Phobee their Casey: hey you got plans tonight? Kyle: why what's happening? Casey: just a party at mangrove river Kyle: who's is it? Casey: some of the boys are having it Kyle: ok, Brax isn't coming then? Casey: he said he was going out with Ricky Kyle: so just us three? Casey: yep, you in? Phobee: sure sounds good Kyle: when's it start? Casey: in an hour, we have time Phobee: ok good Phobee leaves to get ready Kyle: so this party? How many people will be there Casey: probably 100 or so Kyle: ok Casey: yeah of course,let's hope no-one calls the cops ...................... Jett approaches Vj at the party Jett: hey what time is it? Vj checks his phone Vj: oh **** it's later than we said Jett: we'll thrres no calls on my phone, what about yours Vj: nope not on mine either Jett: ok good, we shouldn't of drank that much acohol though Vj: yeah my head hurts Jett hands Vj some water Vj: thanks Jett: I've already drank some water Vj: drink some more you look slightly better than me Jett: yeah I'll have some then I'm leaving, you coming? Vj: I should probably help clean the place but I'll meet you at yours I am hour! Will you be ok to walk back? Jett: it's like a five minute walk I'll be fine Vj hugs Jett Jett: ok I'll text you she I get back Vj: yep cool see you later Jett leaves the house .................... Nate working at the hospital when Zac comes in on a stretcher, he asks a nurse what happened Nurse: Zac, Hannah, Evelyn and Oscar were in a car accident Nate: what? Nurse: the others are coming in we have to work quickly, can you handle this? Nate: yes Nate finds out that a Oscar is in surgery and Evelyn and Hannah are both critical Nate: I have to call people Nurse: no we need you, she calls out to another nurse call the family Nate: that''ll be Denny and call Leah too Nurse: ok let's go .................. Irene is with Leah at their house Leah: I firgured Vj would be back by now Irene: I'm sure he just got caught up Leah: maybe I should call him, I didn't realise how late it was Irene: ok Leah is just about to phone Vj when she has in coming call Leah: hi Nurse: hi is this Leah Patterson? Leah: yes Nurse: there's been an accident Leah: what's happened? Nurse: the McGuire family got into an accident Leah hangs up the phone Irene: what happened? Leah: Zac, Hannah, Evelyn and Oscar were involved in a car accident Irene hugs Leah Matt walks in Matt: what happened? Irene: the mcguires got into a car accident Matt: what? Who else knows Irene: us and Denny probably Matt: I need to go to the hospital Leah: they will call us if there's news Matt: no I can't stay here I have to go Matt bails .................... Matt arrives at the hospital and calls Sasha Matt: come on, pick up Sasha: hi Matt: Sasha it's me you have to come to the hospital now Sasha: what? Why? Matt: I can't tell you over the phone just come Sasha: ok I'll be there soon .................. Vj rocks up at the house John: come in, I thought Hett would be with you Vj: what he's not back yet? John: no, why? Vj: he left the party an hour ago, oh **** he didn't text me John: when was he suppose to text you? Vj: when he got home? John: have you been drinking? Vj: not the point, Jett isn't back yet, someonethings happened to him John: Jetts missing Vj: I thought he would of been ok walking back John gets out his phone and calls the cops John: yes I'd like to report a disaperence ................ Matt is pacing at the hospital and Sasha runs in Sasha: what happened? Matt: Sasha thrres been an accident Sasha: who? Matt: Zac, Hannah, Evelyn and Oscar were in a car accident Sasha: OMG are they ok? Matt: the doctors are doing all they can Sasha: I get it were not family they can't tell us much Matt: yeah but hey it's going to be alright? Sasha: we should call Maddy and Spencer Matt: yeah they will want to know ....................... Mady and Spencer are working at the gym together Maddy: only got an hour left? Spencer: then we can get outta here Maddy gets a call on her phone Maddy: hey Sasha what's up? Spencer: is Spencer with you? Maddy: yeah why? Sasha: good there's something I need to tell you Maddy: your scaring me now, just tell me? Sasha: the McGuire family were involved in scar accident Maddy: are you at the hospital? Sasha: yeah but you don't have to tell, they are all still in surgery there's no news Maddy: so you don't want us there? Sasha: matts here I'm fine, just take care your selfs Maddy: we'll will, bye Maddy hangs up the phone Spencer: what's wrong? Maddy: the mcguires wre in an accident Spencer: what? Are they ok? Maddy: the doctors are doing everything they can Spencer pulls Maddy into a hug Spencer: we should close early Maddy: yeah good idea ......................... Vj comes home Vj: something's happened? Leah: what's happened? Vj: Jetts missing Irene: what how did that happen? Leah: weren't you with him Vj: he walked back from the party by himself, I thought he'd be fine Leah: that's not the only that's happened today? Vj: what's else happened? Irene: the mcguires we're in a car accident Vj: oh mum Vj hugs Leah Leah: the doctors will save them Irene: yes of course they will, they know what they are doing Vj: mum they are going to be fine and the police will find Jett .................. Chris finds Denny on the balcony of the farm house Chris: couldn't sleep either Chris hands her some coffee Denny: my whole family could be dead Chris: they won't be, they are fighters Denny: i just can't think like that Chris: don't worry I'm here for you, there will be good news Chris hugs Denny .................. Maddy: come on let's get out of here Spencer: yeah I'll take you home Maddy: can we just go for a walk first, I need to clear my head Spencer: of course Spencer locks up and Maddy and him bail .............. Alf: when's the kids suppose to back? Roo: soon Alf: ok you want to help me finish this crossword? Roo: sure hand it over Roo has a look at it, this is so easy, Roo fills out the answers and give it back to him Roo: there you go Alf: thanks Maddy and Spencer come in Alf: you guys ok? Maddy: no where not I'm going to my room Maddy leaves Roo: what's happened? Spencer: we're both just upset, the mcguires were in a car accident Roo: what? Spencer: we going to head to the hospital in the mornings there nothing we can do anyway Roo: ok we'll go with you Spencer: thanks, I'm going to go up to bed, night Roo and Alf: goodnight ............ Spencer goes to Maddys room but she's not there, he goes back to his room and finds her there, Spencer closes the door Maddy: what are you doing? Maddy: can I say with you tonight? Spencer: are you sure that's a good idea? Maddy: yes, I need you Spencer: ok you can stay, we just have to be quiet? Maddy: we will be Maddy lays down on the bed and Spencer lays down too, he puts his arms around her and they fall asleep Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted September 9, 2014 Report Share Posted September 9, 2014 Great chapter Update soon please Xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Red Ranger 1 Posted November 5, 2014 Report Share Posted November 5, 2014 I hope you continue with this, it's good to have a fic that focuses on all the characters and you've left it on a bit of a cliffhanger with all the MacGuires in a car accident and Jett missing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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