Inactive User Posted February 21, 2014 Report Posted February 21, 2014 (edited) Great start. This is really good. Update soon please Edited February 21, 2014 by ~JarlieFanEver~ Quote
Inactive User Posted February 22, 2014 Author Report Posted February 22, 2014 Great chapter. Update soon please xx Quote
pembie Posted February 23, 2014 Report Posted February 23, 2014 Wow three weeks is quite a long time for Kyle and Evie to have been missing. They were found far too easily on the show I think. Hopefully Heath and Casey will get a lead on to where they are soon. It will be interesting to see how Kyle and Evie cope in the meantime though. Good writing. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted March 5, 2014 Report Posted March 5, 2014 An interesting and dark story, looking forward to seeing what you do with this scenario. Quote
Inactive User Posted June 14, 2014 Author Report Posted June 14, 2014 Great chapter Update soon please xx Quote
Guest Posted June 15, 2014 Report Posted June 15, 2014 Great chapter I look forward to more update again soon Quote
pembie Posted June 18, 2014 Report Posted June 18, 2014 Evie's in a very bad way at least she has Kyle looking out for her. Intersted to see if Heath and Casey can get Ethan to talk. Or maybe he will end up having a run in with Brax seeing as they will be sharing the same prison. Looking forward to more. Quote
*~Abi~* Posted June 22, 2014 Report Posted June 22, 2014 This story is great, I've just caught up with this and had to post a review, poor Evie poor girl having to go through such an ordeal, kyle is being so sweet with her though, and if you,re going to be trapped in an environment like that someone like kyle and the way he,s being with Evie is just what she needs , I really hope Heath and cases can get through to Ethan, he can't keep the locked up indefinitely. I look forward to see where you go with this really enjoying the story so far ? Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted June 24, 2014 Report Posted June 24, 2014 Wow, I think I missed that last chapter, it was really good.Hope to see more of this story soon. Quote
Guest Posted June 29, 2014 Report Posted June 29, 2014 Great chapter whoa Kyle is joining the cult that was unexcepted update soon Quote
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