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Bretto Posted June 22, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2014 Serena: "Today on Sailor Moon, Darien arrives in Summer Bay and both Raye and I are at odds over him. Meanwhile, Mina decides to join an aerobics class, which is revealed to be a trap by the Negaverse to collect energy from the people in the aerobics class. Will the Sailor Scouts be able to save them? Don't go away. I'll be right back. *Sailor Moon theme song plays* Episode 7 Darien Shields is getting off the bus when he pulls a photo out from his wallet. It's a photo of him and Serena at a theme park back in Tokyo. Darien: Welcome to Summer Bay, Darien. Meatball head, I'm coming for you. *Darien sees Serena and Amy heading for the youth hostel* Darien: I wonder where they're going? *Darien follows Serena and Amy* Serena: I kind of miss Darien. Darien: Well I kind of missed you too, meatball head. *Serena and Amy turn around* Serena: DARIEN! *Serena and Darien hug* Darien: Surprised to see me? Serena: Of course. I missed you. Amy: Hi Darien. What brings you to Summer Bay? Darien: Hey Amy. I wanted to come see you guys. Serena: How did you know we were in Summer Bay? Darien: I came over to your house and your mother told me where you were. Serena: I'm glad that you're here. Darien: Me too. *they smile at each other* (When Serena and Amy return to the youth hostel, Raye sees Darien and glares at Serena.) Raye: Hi Darien. I've missed you. *hugs him* Darien: Same here, Raye. *to Lita and Mina* And how are you girls? Lita: I'm good. Mina: Couldn't be any better. *smiles* Serena: Darien's coming to stay with us. Raye: You must be pleased! *glares at Serena* Amy: Don't start, Raye. Raye: Oh, I'm not starting anything. *Raye storms out of the room* Molly: What was that about? Darien: It's a long story, Molly. Serena: Raye and Darien used to date. Lita: Ever since Darien started having feelings for Serena, Raye has become jealous. Amy: Which is totally unnecessary. Serena: I totally agree. The next morning, Mina arrives at the hostel in a happy mood. Mina: I've got some great news! Lita: What? Mina: I've signed up for some aerobics classes. Serena: That's great, Mina. Where are they held? Mina: In that surf club near the diner. Amy: Interesting. Say, where's Raye? Lita: She's still not back from her walk. Serena: In other words, she's still annoyed about Darien coming to Summer Bay. Amy: She should grow up! Mina: You don't say. Well, I'm off to my first aerobics class. Lita: Have fun. Artemis: Oh, we will. *Mina leaves with Artemis* Serena: Darien is so dreamy. Luna: You've been gushing about him all last night, Serena. Amy: I could hear you talk about him in your sleep. *Raye enters the room* Raye: I'm back from my walk. Serena: How was it? Raye: Lita, we should go to the cinema tonight. Lita: Serena asked you a question. Raye: I don't want to answer her! She's a whiny little pest! *Amy slams her book shut and goes over to Raye* Amy: Raye, shut up! Raye: What? Amy: I have had just about enough of you putting Serena down all the time. Yes, you and Darien broke up but you shouldn't take it out on Serena. Raye: Why? She stole him away from me! Why would Darien be interested in a crybaby? Serena: You are so mean, Raye! *Serena runs out crying* Lita: Serena, wait. *Lita goes after her* Amy: You are a bitter young woman, Raye Hino! Raye: At least I'm not a crybaby like Little Miss Whiner! Amy: Do us a favour and grow up! *Raye looks shocked* Raye: Amy... Amy: Save it, Raye! I'm over your childishness! *Amy leaves the room as Raye sighs* At the surf club, Mina is enjoying her aerobics class. Their instructor is Lydia. Lydia: That's it! Warm those arms! *Mina stretches her arms* Lydia: That's it. Now, that's enough for now. In our next session, I want you all to start powerwalking. Have a break. *As the people in the aerobics class rest up, Lydia goes over to where Jedite is and transforms into a monster called the Fitness Queen* Fitness Queen: Mwah ha ha! Look at those pathetic fools! Jedite: I see you have collected some of the energy, Fitness Queen. Fitness Queen: Oh, I have. I managed to collect one from that Sailor Venus. Jedite: This plan won't fail. Sailor Moon and the rest of those brats are history! Fitness Queen: Indeed they are. *laughs evilly* *Mina and most of her fellow aerobics class participants are unconscious* (Meanwhile, Raye senses trouble.) Raye: Mina is trouble! I have to save her! MARS POWER! *Raye transforms into Sailor Mars and heads to the surf club* Sailor Mars: The door is locked! *Serena, Amy and Lita arrive* Lita: What's up, Raye? Raye: That aerobics class is a trap by the Negaverse. Mina's in trouble. Amy: MERCURY POWER! *Amy transforms into Sailor Mercury* Lita: JUPITER POWER! *Lita transforms into Sailor Jupiter* Sailor Jupiter: *to Serena* Are you ready? Sailor Moon: Of course I'm ready. MOON PRISM POWER! *Serena transforms into Sailor Moon* Sailor Moon: Here goes! *The Sailor Scouts storm inside* Fitness Queen: Good timing, Sailor Scouts! Sailor Moon: I am Sailor Moon, the champion of justice! Sailor Jupiter: And on behalf of Jupiter... Sailor Mars: Mars! Sailor Mercury: And Mercury! All: WE WILL PUNISH YOU! Fitness Queen: Really? Have a taste of my fist pound! *The Fitness Queen pounds her fist into the ground and it causes the Sailor Scouts to lose their balance and fall* Fitness Queen: How do you like that? Sailor Jupiter: You will not get away with this! Prepare to be shocked! JUPITER THUNDER CRASH! *Sailor Jupiter unleashes her attack* Fitness Queen: You missed! Sailor Mercury: MERCURY BUBBLES...BLAST! *Sailor Mercury uses her attack* Fitness Queen: Where are you Sailor Scouts? I'm not done with you yet! *As the Fitness Queen goes to pound the ground with her fist, a red rose stops her!* Fitness Queen: ARGH! *Tuxedo Mask appears* Sailor Moon: It's Tuxedo Mask. Tuxedo Mask: Sailor Scouts, you must join forces in attacking this monster. *Mina wakes up* Mina: You did not just do that to me, you evil monster! VENUS POWER! *Mina transforms into Sailor Venus* Sailor Venus: Fitness Queen, prepare to be smashed! On behalf of Venus, I will unleash my CRESCENT BEAM... Sailor Mars: MARS FIRE.... Sailor Venus: SMASH! Sailor Mars: IGNITE! *The attacks combine and hit the Fitness Queen* Fitness Queen: NOOOOOOOOO!!! Sailor Moon: My turn! *Sailor Moon takes off her tiara which becomes a disk* Sailor Moon: MOON TIARA MAGIC! *The energy disk hits the Fitness Queen, who screams in pain and soon dies* Sailor Moon: Another one bites the moon dust! Zoycite and Jedite are not impressed with this turn of events. Jedite: One of these days, I'll make those Sailor Scouts pay! Zoycite: It seems that we need to lift our game, Jedite. Jedite: We sure do, Zoycite. Those Sailor Scouts have beaten us for too long. Zoycite: We shall unleash a plan that will work wonders for us and misery for those Sailor brats! Jedite: Do tell. Zoycite: But first, you must kiss me. *Jedite and Zoycite kiss* Zoycite: Those Sailor brats will pay their dues. I can promise you that! (Meanwhile, Darien is at the youth hostel visiting Serena and the rest of the girls.) Darien: Serena, I love you. Serena: Darien... Darien: What is it? Serena: I love you too. *smiles* *Darien smiles back* Molly: You guys are so cute together! Lita: I wonder where Raye went? Mina: I think she said she was going to do some shopping in Yabbie Creek. Amy: Well, as long as she's not being mean to Serena. I'm happy. *At the bus stop, Raye is waiting for a bus to take her to the city. While she's waiting, she looks at a photo of her and Darien* Raye: Darien, I still love you. *Raye drops her suitcase and starts to cry* NEXT TIME ON SAILOR MOON - Will Raye leave the Sailor Scouts? Meanwhile, Amy blames herself for Raye leaving. WHEN SAILOR MOON CONTINUES Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Bretto Posted July 2, 2014 Author Report Share Posted July 2, 2014 Serena: "Today on Sailor Moon, there is a crisis amongst the Sailor Scouts as Raye has walked out during an argument with Amy. At the same time, Jedite sends his latest monster, Aqua Wave, to fight us. Will Raye come back or has she left the Sailor Scouts for good? To see what happens, stay tuned and don't go away. *giggles* *Sailor Moon theme song plays* Episode 8 At the bus stop, Raye is still waiting for a bus to take her to the city. Her eyes are red and swollen from crying. Raye: I just wish this bus would hurry up. *Raye sees the bus coming and immediately picks up her suitcase* Raye: This is it. *The bus stops and Raye hops on* Raye: To the city please. *Raye sits down and starts crying again* Raye: Oh, Darien. I just wish you knew how much I loved you. *Raye wipes away her tears with a tissue* (Meanwhile, Serena and the girls are talking about Raye's outburst earlier that day.) Amy: What she said was so uncalled for. Lita: Who are we talking about, Amy? Amy: Raye. I'm over her fights with Serena. She's being a childish brat over Darien! Molly: Hey, are you okay? Amy: No, Molly. I'm fed up with her behaviour. Just as Lita went after Serena today, I decided to have a little talk with Raye. Molly: And how did that go? Amy: I just lost my temper with her. *looks regretful* Lita: You did the right thing, Amy. It's about time Raye stopped behaving like a super brat. *Serena and Mina walk in* Mina: Hey. Molly: How was your beach walk? Serena: Relaxing. It helped me get my mind off things. Luna: Like Raye for instance. Artemis: Where did Raye get off to? Lita: She had to do some shopping in Yabbie Creek. *Mina checks her watch* Mina: She's been gone for nearly two hours. Lita: She'll come back when she's ready. *Serena and the girls look hopeful* That night, Serena and the girls are getting worried as Raye still hasn't returned back from Yabbie Creek. Lita: It's 7:30 and Raye's still not back. Serena: What time does the last bus come? Lita: 7 o'clock. Mina: I just hope she didn't get a lift from some stranger. *looks scared* Amy: Mina, you worry a lot. Mina: It's because I care. *Amy smiles as Darien walks in* Darien: Girls, there' some bad news I'm afraid. Lita: What is it? Darien: Raye's gone to the city. Serena: Why would she go there? Darien: She called me this afternoon. I would've told you all sooner, but Damian Roberts hurt his leg and I had to help him home. Serena: We shall go find Raye! Amy: This is all my fault. I drove her away. Lita: No, you didn't. *Amy looks sad* Mina: Come on, Amy. We shall go find Raye and convince her to come back. All: Good idea! In the Negaverse, Zoycite and Jedite are watching the Scouts through the crystal ball. Jedite: Excellent, just excellent! There is desention amongst the Sailor Scouts. Zoycite: And at a good time too! Jedite: I have a monster waiting in line to destroy those Sailor Scouts for good. Zoycite: Do share, Jedite. Jedite: Well, all I can tell you is that she can deliver very powerful waves and whirlpools. Zoycite: I like the sound of it, Jedite. Proceed immediately. *Jedite smirks* (The next morning, Serena and the girls are at the hostel getting ready to go out.) Serena: I just wish we didn't miss the last bus. We could've talked some sense into Raye. Mina: She'll come back when she's good and ready. That is if she ever does. Amy: This is all my fault. Lita: Amy, stop blaming yourself. It wasn't your fault. Luna: Lita's right. Raye chose to leave. Serena: I miss her. Lita: I must say Serena, that's very generous of you. Serena: Really? Mina: Well, considering the way Raye treats you, you always say nice things about her. *A girl named Dana approaches them* Dana: Excuse me? Amy: Yes, what is it? Dana: Hi, my name is Dana and I was wondering if I could help you look for your friend. Serena: Well, we were taking a bus to the city... Dana: I could be great help. Mina: Let this Dana chick help us, Serena. Please? Serena: Okay. Dana: You go on ahead. I need to collect my money. *As Serena and the girls head for the bus stop, Dana smirks to herself.* Dana: *laughing* Jedite will be so pleased! (In Sydney, Raye is having breakfast at McDonalds.) Raye: I seriously have to watch my weight. Being depressed makes you really hungry. *A guy approaches her* Raye: *in an annoyed tone* May I help you? Oliver: I'm sorry. I was just wondering if you were okay. *Raye look embarrassed* Raye: I apologise for my tone. I've had a rough night. Oliver: It's all good. The name's Oliver. Raye: Raye. *smiles* *they shake hands* Oliver: I recognise you from somewhere. Raye: You do? Oliver: Were you at the Gypsy Nightclub a few weekends ago? Raye: Yeah, I was. Oliver: You were really cute on the dance floor. *Raye blushes* Raye: Thanks, but I must admit I was pretty scared about what happened afterwards. Oliver: Yeah, I heard about those bikers. Raye: So Oliver, um....Whereabouts do you live? Oliver: I live in Alexandria. Raye: I'm staying at the City Crown Motel in Room 18. Oliver: I'll come back with you. Raye: I would like that. *smiles* Meanwhile, Serena and her friends are stranded in Yabbie Creek when the bus they were on crashed into a tree. Serena: I can't believe this! Just when we were on our way to the city, this happens! Lita: Calm down, Serena. It's not the end of the world. Mina: How are we going to get home now? Luna: I have a bad feeling about this. Amy: Luna? Luna: The bus driver was going at the right speed when he couldn't get his breaks to work. Something tells me that the Negaverse is behind the crash. Lita: Are you saying the breaks were tampered with? Luna: Correct. Mina: You know what's also fishy? Is that Dana chick not getting on the bus with us! Serena: Fishy indeed! Let's confront her! Amy: Good idea. (When they return to Summer Bay that afternoon, Serena and the girls confront Dana on the beach.) Serena: You tampered with those breaks on the bus, didn't you?! Dana: So what if I did? It was only fun and games. Mina: Playing games and having fun is one thing, but putting other peoples lives in danger is NOT a game! Dana: You lot are pathetic! Feel the force of my waves! *Dana transforms into a monster named Aqua Wave* Aqua Wave: Ready for a good soaking? Luna: Girls, transform now! Serena: MOON PRISM POWER! Amy: MERCURY POWER! Lita: JUPITER POWER! Mina: VENUS POWER! *They transform* All: We are the Sailor Scouts! *Aqua Wave looks unimpressed* Sailor Moon: I am Sailor Moon, the champion of justice! Sailor Mercury: I am Sailor Mercury! Sailor Jupiter: I am Sailor Jupiter! Sailor Venus: And I am Sailor Venus! Sailor Moon: And on behalf of the Sailor Scouts... All: WE WILL PUNISH YOU! Aqua Wave: You girls will punish me? How about I punish you with a whirlpool?! *Aqua Wave unleashes a whirlpool and it traps the Sailor Scouts* Sailor Moon: I just wish Sailor Mars was here! *Suddenly, a red rose stops the whirlpool* Aqua Wave: WHAT ON EARTH?! *Tuxedo Mask appears* Tuxedo Mask: Sailor Scouts, fight this monster with everything you got. Sailor Mercury: I shall start off. MERCURY BUBBLES...BLAST! *Sailor Mercury unleashes her attack* Aqua Wave: I can't see! Sailor Venus: VENUS CRESCENT BEAM SMASH! *The attack hits Aqua Wave* Aqua Wave: YOU BRAT! Sailor Jupiter: JUPITER THUNDER CRASH! *Sailor Jupiter unleashes her attack* Aqua Wave: AAAAAAHHHHH! *Aqua Wave is sparking all over* Luna: Sailor Moon, use your tiara! Sailor Moon: Right. *Sailor Moon takes her tiara off which becomes a disk* Sailor Moon: MOON TIARA MAGIC! *The energy disk hits Aqua Wave* Aqua Wave: HOW DARE YOU!!! *Aqua Wave soon dies* Sailor Moon: Another monster defeated! *From a distance, Jedite is not happy about Aqua Wave's defeat* Jedite: YOU SAILOR SCOUTS WON'T GET AWAY WITH THIS! I SHALL BEAT YOU ONE DAY! That night, Serena and the girls are talking about Raye. Serena: I just wish Raye would've helped us. Amy: I hate to say it, but I think that Raye has left for good. Mina: She was a great asset to the Sailor Scouts. Lita: Well, I have no sympathy for her. She brought her jealousy and childish behaviour on herself. She has no one but herself to blame! Serena: Lita... Lita: No, Serena. I'm done giving Raye a pity party! It's a joke! *Lita storms out of the room, leaving Serena, Amy and Mina looking stunned* NEXT TIME ON SAILOR MOON - Lita has a heart to heart with Serena, while Oliver confesses his true feelings for Raye. 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