smokinace Posted May 10, 2014 Report Share Posted May 10, 2014 CHAPTER 4 Denny was setting the table "You're sure it's ok if he stays" Denny said quietly to Zac "Yeah fine, besides it would be good to get to know a bit more about your childhood" Zac joked "So Hannah's your dad's other wife's sister" Chevy said to Denny "That's right" "Oh, awkward" he said She turned around "Not as awkward as sleeping with my mother" she said Chevy felt everyone's eyes on him "Thanks for the offer, but I think I'll find new digs" Chevy told them CHAPTER 5 UP SOON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted May 10, 2014 Report Share Posted May 10, 2014 Short and sweet but great chapter look forward to reading more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
smokinace Posted May 10, 2014 Report Share Posted May 10, 2014 CHAPTER 5 Denny chased Chevy out the door "I thought you were cool with it" Chevy yelled "No I'm not cool with it, why would I be?" She yelled back "Ah gee, I dunno maybe because you dumped me and according to your sister you moved on pretty easily" "You slept with my mother" she yelled as he opened the door of his ute "And I enjoyed it" he shouted Denny looked shocked "I'm sorry, I didn't mean that" he said reaching out to her "Why don't you just go back to her" she said angrily pulling away from him "Denny" he called as she stormed back inside "Stupid" he said to himself as he kicked the door of his ute shut CHAPTER 6 UP SOON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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smokinace Posted May 11, 2014 Report Share Posted May 11, 2014 CHAPTER 6 Denny , Evie and Oscar were walking past the surf club. "So were Chevy and your mum together for long" Evie asked "Apparently it was one night" Denny replied "You don't need someone like that in you life anyway" Oscar said Denny stopped when she saw Chevy sitting on the bonet of his ute "I'll be right back, you guys" Denny told her siblings "You're still here" Denny said "I'm leaving today, I just wanted to say goodbye first" Chevy replied She sat down next to him "To be honest, I think we both made some mistakes and both of us could've dealt with better" she told him "No, I think it was just me who screwed up" he replied "You had every right to move on I shouldn't have accused you of being a slut" he said She put her arm around him and rested her head on his shoulder "This constitutes as hugging" he informed her "Well if we're getting back together this Is my first step toward fixing things between us" she told him "You mean that?" He asked and kissed her on top her head CHAPTER 7 UP SOON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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smokinace Posted May 11, 2014 Report Share Posted May 11, 2014 CHAPTER 7 Denny and Chevy walked inside the farm house. "Guys is the offer still good about Chevy staying?" Denny asked Zac and Hannah "Yeah sure" Hannah replied a bit shocked "Great" Denny said "We'd prefer it if he stayed on the couch though, we know you're a grown mature woman but just out of respect for the rest of us" Zac added "Couch is fine" Chevy confirmed sticking a thumb up at Zac and Hannah He turned to Denny "I'll get my gear from the ute" Chevy told her "So you two sorted everything out?" Hannah asked "Yeah, we decided to give us another go, we'll I decided. Just hope I don't regret it" Denny told him CHAPTER 8 UP SOON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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