Red Ranger 1 Posted October 27, 2013 Author Report Share Posted October 27, 2013 Woah!What?!Brax is dead?Hard to interpret that last line any other way even though no-one said it.Sounds like Noah's in a pretty bad way as well and Bianca's gone.That is a pretty big shock, can't wait to see what you do with this now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spotd1 Posted October 27, 2013 Report Share Posted October 27, 2013 (edited) Just caught up on the last few chapters! I wonder what happened with Bianca?! Brax sounds really bad, hope not though! Can't blame Heath for being so upset...hope Bianca calls or comes home when she's doing a bit better! Great writing once again Danni! Xx Ok, I misinterpreted that second last sentence...surely Brax didn't die?! Edited October 27, 2013 by Spotd1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beebee Posted October 27, 2013 Report Share Posted October 27, 2013 (edited) I keep scratching my head ... I'm so confused!!! How long was the time jump??? Great individual chapter, but just didn't follow on from the last one like you normally do ... like I said at the start, I'm Just a little confused :-/ Edited October 27, 2013 by beebee Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freakie42 Posted October 27, 2013 Report Share Posted October 27, 2013 Woah! A lot seems to have happened since the last chapter! I take it Brax has gone blind in the accident?! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Zoe~ Posted October 27, 2013 Report Share Posted October 27, 2013 blimey, a lot seems to have happened since that last chapter.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CharlieAndBraxLover Posted October 28, 2013 Report Share Posted October 28, 2013 Oh my god Danni!!!!!!! I was literally left with my mouth open in shock!! I read every single chapter but rarely have time to log in to comment, but I had to for this chapter! I am so confused! I don't know whether Brax is dead, is blind, has a brain injury, or is in jail (if he drove the car but Bianca made them cause the accident and others died)? I so don't want him to be dead :'( I can't believe how horrific that chapter was haha. Incredibly writing to spark such a reaction! Xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 28, 2013 Author Report Share Posted October 28, 2013 Didn't occur to me that Brax might "just" be blind until others said it, guess that's better than death.Didn't realise the crash was so recent either.Loved the scene between Heath and April, she's obviously haunted by the fact she could be a mother about now as well, which is very believable.Looking forward to more! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted October 28, 2013 Report Share Posted October 28, 2013 Great chapter Glad Brax is not dead. But it's so sad he's blind Will be interesting to see how he copes with life as a blind person. Update soon xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beebee Posted October 28, 2013 Report Share Posted October 28, 2013 That's so sad :-( ... Really hope for a miracle that Brax gets his vision back!! Not confused any more :-P .... Such an emotional update x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CharlieAndBraxLover Posted October 28, 2013 Report Share Posted October 28, 2013 Oh my god what a heart breaking chapter :'( I'm do devastated for Brax! So now in the chapter before this one, I realise when Charlie asked about "how was he tonight" it was about Brax.. Like everyone else I'm looking forward to seeing how they cope with the blindness, but also hoping Brax's sight eventually comes back Brilliant writing sweetheart xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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