Inactive User Posted November 2, 2013 Report Posted November 2, 2013 (edited) Welcome back, RR1! *runs to hug RR1 welcoming him back* Great start to this fanfiction. Whoa at the ending! Not expecting that at all. Can't wait to read what will happen next! Update soon please xxx Edited November 2, 2013 by ~JarlieFanEver~ Quote
JosieTash Posted November 3, 2013 Report Posted November 3, 2013 What an AMAZING way to start a fic !!!!! LOOOVED it!! I initially thought that Heath/April had got married when they were drunk [and couldn’t remember] but they BOTH do seem to be well aware that the ceremony occurred. MUCHLY looking forward to more. Quote
Zetti Posted November 3, 2013 Report Posted November 3, 2013 Uh oh naughty April.. very good start to the fanfiction! Looking forward to reading more Quote
pembie Posted November 3, 2013 Report Posted November 3, 2013 WOW that was a brilliant start. When you said the wedding is interrupted by some shocking news you weren't kidding. Shame on April and Heath. Fancy hiding a big secret like that from Dexter and Bianca. Good job Sid got there to stop the wedding. Quote
Danni02 Posted November 3, 2013 Report Posted November 3, 2013 So glad to see a new fiction from you. Great start and I can't wait to read more. Quote
Inactive User Posted November 4, 2013 Author Report Posted November 4, 2013 Great chapter Can't wait to see how everyone e.g. Irene and Marilyn, Casey reacts to everything in next chapter. Update soon please xx Quote
pembie Posted November 4, 2013 Report Posted November 4, 2013 Wow they got married thinking it was just a game or a joke? Seriously like that is so uncool and pretty much unforgivable. Not liking Heath and April here much. But the story is brilliant. Quote
Danni02 Posted November 4, 2013 Report Posted November 4, 2013 Heath and April are pretty stupid for thinking it was just a joke wedding. I don't blame Dexter and Bianca's actions. I feel bad for Dexter but I feel more sorry for Bianca. She thought she was married to Heath then finds out her sister actually is. Can't wait to see (or should I say read) how all things are going to go.Update soon Quote
JosieTash Posted November 4, 2013 Report Posted November 4, 2013 Trust Heath to be involved a wedding THIS intriguing !!!!! LOOOOVED Sid’s line about Hawaii thing !!!!! TERRIFIC fic so far !!! Quote
RoRo90 Posted November 4, 2013 Report Posted November 4, 2013 Great start to this fic Ending of the first chapter had my mouth wide open Feel bad for both Dex and Bianca especially Bianca knowing her marriage wasn't even legal Cant wait to see where you take this. Heath and April have a lot of groveling to do Quote
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