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The Girl in the Red Dress (by TelephotoMarigold) - comments


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Wow, I could see that playing out in my head. Every single part of it. I wasn't expecting it to be Nicole. I automatically assumed it was Ruby until Charlie saw her in her bed. I can't explain how much I loved it but honestly I want to know more about why Nicole reappeared. Again penn! I didn't expect that.

Thoroughly enjoyed reading this :)

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Good to see that you have posted this.Even though I remember reading before when you gave me a sneaky preview of it. It was even better reading it for a second time. I didn't remember the ending. So that was a great and a very chilling twist with Charlie having her dream become a reality.

Really cool story

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