Inactive User Posted September 18, 2012 Report Posted September 18, 2012 (edited) Wow great one-shot-really amusing and chilling, but good to read! I love mystery stories Well done, mate Edited September 18, 2012 by ~JarlieFanEver~ Quote
pembie Posted September 18, 2012 Report Posted September 18, 2012 (edited) Wow this had a somewhat spooky feel to it. I don't know why it made me think of a old movie called Don't Look Now. Where a father thinks he sees a ghost of a little girl that he thinks is his daughter, wearing a red coat in a busy street. It also made me think of IT but I guess that was probably because of the clown and the yellow balloon. Where ever there is a clown danger is sure to follow. I thought it was a very good and chilling story. Edited September 18, 2012 by pembie Quote
Phoebe Posted September 26, 2012 Report Posted September 26, 2012 Wow! You should make a sequal to this story! Quote
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