Guest Posted September 22, 2012 Report Share Posted September 22, 2012 Haha Irene's dream man great update Steve please update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoebe Posted September 24, 2012 Report Share Posted September 24, 2012 I laughed a couple of times during those chapters! Well done Steve! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted September 24, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2012 Awesome chapter More soon please xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted September 25, 2012 Report Share Posted September 25, 2012 Oh...man.Alf as a "foul-mouthed" celebrity chef.Pretty much the whole of Dexter's scene.Actually, pretty much the whole thing, I was grinning and laughing all the way through.Great update! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted September 25, 2012 Report Share Posted September 25, 2012 Great update Steve update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted October 1, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 1, 2012 Hahahaha this chapter cracked me up! Well done, Pembie Loved Charlie's reaction at the end. More soon pleae xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 1, 2012 Report Share Posted October 1, 2012 Excellent chapter!Loved Dexter being the only customer in Angelo's and the rest of it made me smile, you manage to keep them in character while still being incredibly funny.Looking forward to more! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted October 1, 2012 Report Share Posted October 1, 2012 Great update Steve please update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ScreamingQueen2006 Posted October 4, 2012 Report Share Posted October 4, 2012 Great chapter. You write comedy so well, you're my favourite fanfic writer of comedy. Update again soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted October 5, 2012 Report Share Posted October 5, 2012 (edited) Excellent chapter!Loved Dexter being the only customer in Angelo's and the rest of it made me smile, you manage to keep them in character while still being incredibly funny.Looking forward to more! Thanks I'm not always sure I keep everyone in character but I'm happy you feel I'm doing a good job. Great chapter. You write comedy so well, you're my favourite fanfic writer of comedy. Update again soon. WOW THANKS I'm Really your favourite writer of comedy on here? That's just epic.. Thanks for your comments Sarah and Kristen glad your still enjoying this story Edited October 5, 2012 by pembie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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