Phoebe Posted April 12, 2012 Report Share Posted April 12, 2012 Great start! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MatildaHunterFan Posted April 14, 2012 Report Share Posted April 14, 2012 Aww, Dex was adorable in this chapter!! Love it, update soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoebe Posted April 15, 2012 Report Share Posted April 15, 2012 Wow! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jen Posted April 15, 2012 Report Share Posted April 15, 2012 No! Dex, what are you doing?! You've done the older woman thing before with Marilyn and it was creepy then, and it's not any less weird now. You were doing so good with the Spiderman references and being adorable and just brushing it off, and now you've gone and ruined everything. Sigh. I'm going to pout until everything sorts itself out. A well written chapter. (I'm not angry at you for giving conflict to the story, but Dex.) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted April 16, 2012 Report Share Posted April 16, 2012 Whoa at the part about Dexter and Leah! I agree with Jen. Such a great chapter. More soon please xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miranda Posted April 16, 2012 Report Share Posted April 16, 2012 Dear oh dear oh dear, what are Dex and Leah doing? At least she's a bit younger than Marilyn I'd love to know how you thought this up Red. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danni02 Posted April 16, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 16, 2012 Oh my goodness Leah and Dex! Intersting! Can't wait to see where you take this now... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted April 18, 2012 Report Share Posted April 18, 2012 No no no no! Dex!! Silly silly boy! Hope you update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted April 19, 2012 Report Share Posted April 19, 2012 So Dex got lucky with Leah. Bet he feels like the cat who got the cream. Very intersting I didn't see this happening. Loved Vj's line about thinking Dex is nice and Leah agreeing with him,made me smile. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoebe Posted April 21, 2012 Report Share Posted April 21, 2012 Fantastic Chapter red! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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