Danni02 Posted April 7, 2012 Report Share Posted April 7, 2012 Good start. Interested to see where this goes. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted April 7, 2012 Report Share Posted April 7, 2012 Great chapter. Interesting start. Looking forwards to where you are taking this. Update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted April 8, 2012 Report Share Posted April 8, 2012 Good start interested to see where you take this.I liked Dex saying He wasn't able to help but then stopping in mid sentence as soon as Leah mentioned money. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miranda Posted April 8, 2012 Report Share Posted April 8, 2012 This looks interesting Red. I admire your commitment to H&A fanfic, well done that man Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted April 8, 2012 Report Share Posted April 8, 2012 I am very intrigued to see how you start and progress with this story, looks like one of my favourite stories already and its barely started. Keep it up Red. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jen Posted April 10, 2012 Report Share Posted April 10, 2012 “Well, some people call me pretty smart.Others call me loser geek or socially inept.” Yes! Someone else is writing Dex-centric fanfic and it's sort of awesome so far even though it's only the first chapter. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MatildaHunterFan Posted April 10, 2012 Report Share Posted April 10, 2012 Great beginning Red! I agree with Jen, I love Dex-fanfics. Interesting start, well-written, great! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted April 10, 2012 Report Share Posted April 10, 2012 Awesome chapter Liked the interaction between Dexter and VJ More soon please xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jen Posted April 10, 2012 Report Share Posted April 10, 2012 Your Dexter is wonderful with his many pop culture references and obscure yet endearing way of interacting with others. Can't wait to see how his relationship with VJ, and to a lesser extent, Leah, develops. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted April 11, 2012 Report Share Posted April 11, 2012 Ah so Geography's just like the sims I feel I have learnt something too. Liked Dex's chat with Leah at the end there. Some very good lines. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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