pembie Posted March 30, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2012 Nice chapter. Poor Annie, It wasn't very cool of Heath to throw Belle's old carmea in the sea. Nice description of his grenade tattoo on his neck I knew as soon as I read that, that it was Heath.Looks like Matt's going to be abit of a troublemaker. :lol:Looks like Gina's money will be spent fast. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted April 5, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 5, 2012 Good chapter. I might be wrong here but I could see a Annie and Matthew romance happening latter on in the story. Here's hoping Jack and Martha end up together. Look forward to more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted April 6, 2012 Report Share Posted April 6, 2012 Great chapter Update soon please xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted April 12, 2012 Report Share Posted April 12, 2012 Great chapter. Interesting twist bringing Brett into this fanfiction Update soon please xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted April 13, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 13, 2012 interested to see if Brett's plan of knocking the houses down in the bay works That will cause alot of trouble I expect if he goes ahead with it. Hm so I might be on to something with Annie and Matthew? mmmmmmmmmmmm I defo see the love happening between these two. Look forward to more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted April 16, 2012 Report Share Posted April 16, 2012 Great chapter Update soon please xx And thank you so much for the comments on my fanfictions Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted April 17, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 17, 2012 Oh dear I wonder how Ravier will manage with no money.I thought I would use your nickname for them It was very unfortunate for them to get robbed. They seemed to be having great time with Gina's bank card too. Look forward to more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted April 17, 2012 Report Share Posted April 17, 2012 Great chapter Looking forwards to more soon xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted April 20, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 20, 2012 Oh my I liked Ruby's far fetched tale about the one armed man stealing her and Charlie's bags on the plane. Calling Xavier Marvin was just classic Clever that you dropped the part about Brax and Hugo in here good job I had read your other story last night, Otherwise I would be abit confused with rhat part. Keep up the good writing enjoying this story. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freakie42 Posted April 20, 2012 Report Share Posted April 20, 2012 Love your story, keep up the good writing! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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