Guest Posted December 20, 2011 Report Posted December 20, 2011 Story Title: The Uninvited Type of story: Medium Main Characters:Hayden and Claire Braxton BTTB rating: A Genre: Romance. Does story include spoilers: no Any warnings: No Summary Claire and Hayden are involved in a fatual car accident and one of their friends die but they still believe she is alive Chapter 1 It was a dark night and Hayden Braxton was driving. There was a loud noise. Hayden had hit something. Claire was unconscious Hayden looked to see what she had hit Hayden gasped she had hit a tree Hayden turned around to look at Heather she didn’t look like she was breathing. Hayden called the ambulance By the time the ambulance go to the crash scene Hayden was also unconscious Hayden and Claire only remember waking up in hospital beds “Where’s Heather?” They had both asked They we’re both told that she was dead. Hayden was sure she had seen Heather unless it was a dream. Claire screamed out in her sleep alot. Claire’s parents told her that she was seeing Heather in her dreams. Hayden wasn’t the best driver and now she wasn’t even allowed to drive. Claire refuses to drive unless she has too. Hayden was staying with Charlie and Brax while her parents we’re out of town even though they we’re contacted about the accident. Charlie had told her daughter not to worry she would look after Hayden. Hayden missed her parent’s “Charlie when will mum and dad be back?"” Hayden asked “Tomorrow rest sweetie” Charlie replied Claire was asleep across the room.
Inactive User Posted December 20, 2011 Report Posted December 20, 2011 Liked the first chapter Looking forwards to read more soon xx
JosieTash Posted December 21, 2011 Report Posted December 21, 2011 INTRIGUING opener, especially............. “Where’s Heather?” They had both asked They we’re both told that she was dead. Hayden was sure she had seen Heather unless it was a dream. Claire screamed out in her sleep alot. Claire’s parents told her that she was seeing Heather in her dreams. Hayden wasn’t the best driver and now she wasn’t even allowed to drive. Claire refuses to drive unless she has too.
Guest Posted June 28, 2012 Report Posted June 28, 2012 Thanks everyone here is the next chapter Chapter 2 Casey and Ruby had just got back from holiday to find out that their daughter Hayden was in hospital they barely had time to go home and unload their bags before they rushed off to the hospital. On the way Ruby tried to ring Charlie it went straight to voice mail. “Hi Mum It’s me I’m on my way to the hospital to visit Claire and Hayden if you’re already at the hospital I will see you soon if not please ring me when you can I love you Bye” They arrived at the hospital the rude nurse who delivered Hayden was on duty. “Excuse Me” Casey said “What?” The rude nurse asked she didn’t even look at Ruby or Casey “Where’s our daughter” Ruby asked “In there” the rude nurse said Ruby really didn’t like her but they headed into Hayden and Claire’s room to find Brax and Charlie already there. “Hi” Charlie said “Hi Mum how are they” Ruby asked “Still freaked out they believe Heather is still alive” Charlie responded “Oh but she died?” Ruby asked “Yes” Charlie responded “Oh what happened?” Ruby asked “It was dark and Hayden couldn’t see where she was going she crashed in a tree” Charlie answered “Oh” Ruby whispered “Casey can I speak to you for a moment?” Brax asked “Yeah sure” Casey responded as he followed Brax out of the room leaving Ruby and Charlie in the room with the girls. “Charlie and I had an idea to get there girls minds off of Heather we we’re thinking Claire and Hayden could waitress at the restaurant for a while” Brax said “Sound reasonable” Casey responded Back inside the hospital room Hayden had just woken up to find Ruby in the room with Charlie. “Oh hey Mum” Hayden said “Hi Baby” Ruby responded “When can I go home?” Hayden asked “Hopefully later this afternoon” Ruby responded Casey and Brax walked into the room and announced to Ruby that Hayden would be working at the Restaurant when she was better. “You too Claire” Brax said “Don’t worry honey Daddy worked as a pizza delivery guy when he was 18 or 19 for a while.” Casey said Hayden laughed 2 weeks later. “Claire hurry up or Daddy will leave without you” Charlie called up the stairs Claire came down the stairs dressed in a waitress uniform “Hurry we have to go get Hayden you don’t want to be late for your first day” Brax said Brax got in to the driver’s seat and Claire get in on the passenger’s side. Brax started the car and headed towards Hayden’s house. Hayden was already waiting outside as Brax pulled up Hayden opened the backseat passenger’s door and got in. “Ready for your first day?” Brax asked “I guess” Hayden responded as Brax drove towards the restaurant.
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