Danni02 Posted December 27, 2011 Report Share Posted December 27, 2011 Poor Indi and Xavier It's so sad they lost their little girl Really well written chapter. Update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JosieTash Posted December 27, 2011 Report Share Posted December 27, 2011 WOAH !!!! That was tough going, especially............. .“You mean…you want Indi to give birth to our dead baby?There’s got to be another way, surely?” “We could remove the foetus surgically,”Sid admitted,“But this is by far the safest option.” “You can’t put her through that!” Indi pulled away from his grip slightly, straightening her hair and trying to appear calm and composed. “Do it,”she told them,“I just want it over with.” “No,”Ruby said quietly,“A few hours ago, I was happy, this was the best day of my life.And now all this has happened.And I wish we could still be happy because this, us, is a happy thing.And then I feel guilty for feeling like that because we’re still going to be engaged tomorrow and we’re still going to get married but Xavier and Indi…their baby’s gone for good and they’re never going to get it back and I just feel so bad for them…” Romeo walked over to her and hugged her.She buried her face in his chest and he kissed the top of her head, gently stroking her hair.“I don’t know how to feel either,”he admitted,“I want to go and see them both but it kind of feels like rubbing their noses in it when we’ve got everything they haven’t.” The ENTIRE birth sequence Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted December 27, 2011 Report Share Posted December 27, 2011 That last scene had me in tears, honestly my heart breaks for them both, such a horrible ordeal to go through, it is never easy to lose a baby in any circumstances but to have to give birth to a baby who is already dead I cant stop crying at it but it was really well written. Hope you update soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted December 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 27, 2011 Gosh the ending with Xavier and Indi holding their baby girl and saying goodbye to her was sooo sad! It's such a beautifully and well-written chapter. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted December 28, 2011 Report Share Posted December 28, 2011 Great update but I feel sorry for Indi and Xavier Please update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soph1303 Posted December 28, 2011 Report Share Posted December 28, 2011 Wow great update, Aww that update was so sad I nearly cried !! Really well written though !! More soon please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted December 28, 2011 Report Share Posted December 28, 2011 Poor Xavier and Indi. A very sad chapter but very well written. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighwayUnicorn Posted December 29, 2011 Report Share Posted December 29, 2011 (edited) Deleted. Edited September 19, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Merlin Posted December 31, 2011 Report Share Posted December 31, 2011 Beautifully written as always, RR1. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted January 1, 2012 Report Share Posted January 1, 2012 Thank you for the comments, everyone.I have done a bit of work on the next chapter but my computer chose New Year's Eve to die on me so I'm round my parents' using their computer and being antisocial.So it might be a week or two before I get it repaired/replaced and get another chapter up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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