Chax47 Posted December 6, 2011 Report Share Posted December 6, 2011 Aww he loves her!!! I hope she gives him another chance! Update soon!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cecil Posted December 6, 2011 Report Share Posted December 6, 2011 Great update! I'm interested to see what happens to Heath and Bianca! Hope they get together Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shezza Posted December 6, 2011 Report Share Posted December 6, 2011 Wow Great Start. I really enjoyed this and I hope you update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danni02 Posted December 6, 2011 Report Share Posted December 6, 2011 This is a great start I'm glad Charlie told Brax about her past, and poor Bianca update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JosieTash Posted December 7, 2011 Report Share Posted December 7, 2011 REALLY enjoying this, most especially .....  "Xavier had a chucker he?" Heath smirked  "Heath wouldn't do it because he knows if he did I'd kill him and that should be enough for you too" Brax replied.  Scared that you won't love me if you knew what happened" She cried as she fell to the floor in heap  She emerged two minutes later wearing only her silky blue night gown the one that Brax loved.  Brax held her tight pulling him closer to him never wanting to let her go and he felt a tear trickle down his face as he thought in horror how could someone do this to his beautiful baby.  "I told him to stop but he just told me to shut up and hit me across the face. I screamed but nobody heard me..... WHen he finished with me I was in pain and crying uncontrollably but all he did was laugh at me and didn't let anyone until I found out I was 4 months pregnant with Ruby and there was nothing I could do.  "I have never felt this way about anyone before Irene, Bianca she is absolutely amazing and I would never do anything to hurt her because..." "Because what?!" Irene questioned sternly "Because I love her alright" Heath yelled  "No Heath because you didn't know what it felt like to be that person lying there in the dirt feeling absolutely disgusted with yourself and knowing you were the victim of it!! Bianca shouted Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soph1303 Posted December 7, 2011 Report Share Posted December 7, 2011 Great start, More soon please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmyKate68 Posted December 7, 2011 Report Share Posted December 7, 2011 If only this was the way this had all happened on the show! Really enjoyed the first 2 chapters and look forward to seeing what happens next. What has Heath left for Bianca? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shezza Posted December 8, 2011 Report Share Posted December 8, 2011 I am loving this so far. I love it when the Braxton boy's softer side is shown in stories. I wonder wha Heath left for Bianca. I hope to read more really soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted December 8, 2011 Report Share Posted December 8, 2011 Liking it so far More soon xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CharlieandBrax4Ever Posted December 8, 2011 Report Share Posted December 8, 2011 Hey guys thankyou for all the comments, if you have any ideas for the next chapter please send them in to me, i should have the next chapter up by this afternoon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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