Guest Posted November 13, 2011 Report Posted November 13, 2011 Story Title: The Messengers Type of story: Medium/Long fic . Main Characters: Ruby Braxton,Casey Braxton,Hayden Braxton and Lindsey and Jess Braxton Other Characters: Charlie,Claire,Brax,Melanie and Heath BTTB rating: A to be safe. Genre: Angst Does story include spoilers: No Any warnings: Not at the moment Summary Ruby and Casey buy a new house and after they move in 17 Year old Hayden and her 3 year old twin sisters Lindsey and Jess see ghosts but no one else can see them. I got the title from a movie called The Messengers Chapter 1 Casey and Ruby Braxton had just brought a new house and they we’re just about to move in with their teenage daughter Hayden and their twin daughters Lindsey and Jess. The kids hadn’t seen the house Ruby and Casey went one day while Hayden was at school and the twins we’re at day care. They really loved the house and they we’re hoping that troubled Hayden would too. Hayden Braxton woke up one morning to find boxes everyone. Hayden walked down the stairs “Mum’ Dad are we moving?” Haden asked “Yes we’ve lived in this house sine you we’re three and we want the twins to live a different house this isn’t a punishment” Ruby responded “When are we leaving?” Hayden asked “Today if possible” Casey responded “Hayden can you check on the twins?” Ruby asked Hayden turned around without saying anything and went back upstairs to check on her sisters. They we’re having a nap “They’re napping” Hayden told Ruby Hayden grabs the car keys. “Where are you going?” Casey asked “To see Claire” Hayden responded “But that’s an hour’s drive” Ruby said “Yeah well how long will it be from our new place?” Hayden asked “Three’ Casey replied “I don’t have to change school’s do I?” Hayden asked “Afraid so” Ruby responded “Great” Hayden muttered Just as Hayden got to the car she heard the twins cry. Hayden got into the car.
JosieTash Posted November 13, 2011 Report Posted November 13, 2011 LOVING the sound of this being a ghost story of sorts, and coooool that Rubes & Case have 3 kids !!!!
Inactive User Posted November 13, 2011 Report Posted November 13, 2011 Ohh I did watch this film on DVD and it's really good-such a thriller film. Liking the sound of a fanfiction with the film's title Update soon xx
Guest Posted December 20, 2011 Report Posted December 20, 2011 Thanks everyone here is the next chapter hope it's ok. Chapter 2 Hayden wasn’t a very good driver but she was angry with her parents. A few streets from Claire’s Hayden crashed the car. “Oh great mum’s going to kill me” Hayden muttered Her phone rung “Hello?” Hayden asked “Hi” Claire said “Oh hey I’m on my way over” Hayden said “Don’t bother’ Claire said “Claire what?” Hayden asked “I know you’re moving and you didn’t tell me “Claire responded “I was going too but I crashed the car into a gutter “Hayden responded “Whatever go back to your perfect life” Claire said Hayden was about to reply but Claire had already slammed the phone down Hayden finally got the car out of the gutter and drove back home Casey was outside when Hayden got home “What happened to the car?” Casey asked “Crashed into a gutter” Hayden responded “Did you see Claire?” Casey asked “No did you tell Charlie and Brax we are moving?”Hayden asked “Yeah” Casey responded “Yeah well Claire is mad at me” Hayden said “No driving for you missy” Casey called over his shoulder.
Inactive User Posted December 20, 2011 Report Posted December 20, 2011 Great chapter. Really well written Update soon xx
JosieTash Posted December 21, 2011 Report Posted December 21, 2011 LIKED that, especially............. A few streets from Claire’s Hayden crashed the car. “Oh great mum’s going to kill me” Hayden muttered “I know you’re moving and you didn’t tell me “Claire responded “I was going too but I crashed the car into a gutter “Hayden responded “Whatever go back to your perfect life” Claire said “No did you tell Charlie and Brax we are moving?”Hayden asked “Yeah” Casey responded “Yeah well Claire is mad at me” Hayden said “No driving for you missy” Casey called over his shoulder
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