Guest Posted November 13, 2011 Report Share Posted November 13, 2011 Story Title: The truth Type of story: Medium/Long fic . Main Characters: Heath Braxton Melanie Callahan Other Characters: Charlie Buckton,Brax,Ruby Buckton and Casey Braxton BTTB rating: A to be safe. Genre: Angst Does story include spoilers: No Any warnings: Not at the moment Summary: Melanie wants to know the truth about her mother will Heath tell her? Chapter 1 Melanie Callahan was sitting at the table doing her homework she looked up and asked her Grandpa Heath Braxton for like the millionth time what happened to her mum. “You’re too young” Heath would reply “When will I be old enough?”Melanie would ask But not today. “Well a few days after Darcy brought you home from the hospital she went for a drive and on her way back home a drunk driver ran a red light and it killed her instantly” Heath told Melanie “Wait so you’ve pretty much raised me with help from the family?” Melanie asked “Yes for the first few days it wasn’t easy but as you got older it get a little bit easier” Heath responded Melanie went back to doing her homework. When it was time to go to bed she said goodnight to Heath but she couldn’t get to sleep the story about how her mum died scared her and she’s only 10 maybe she should of waited a few years before asked a lone tear fell down her cheek but after that Melanie tried not to think about it she went to sleep or at least tried too. The next day Melanie went off to school like any other day but the whole time she was thinking about her mum and how she wasn’t sure if Grandpa Heath was telling her the whole truth he never told her who her father is. Melanie wasn’t sure she wanted to know who her father was that day Melanie decided to ask Grandpa Heath if he knew what happened to her mum before the car accident that killed her. The school day went quick for Melanie and Grandpa Heath always picked her up. As soon as Melanie got into the car she started asking questions “Grandpa how did my mum get pregnant?” Melanie asked “She was raped at a party “Heath responded “Do you know who my father is?” Melanie asked “Some guy named Jack St Bride” Heath Responded Melanie shivered at that name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JosieTash Posted November 13, 2011 Report Share Posted November 13, 2011 LIKED this ....... When it was time to go to bed she said goodnight to Heath but she couldn’t get to sleep the story about how her mum died scared her and she’s only 10 maybe she should of waited a few years before asked a lone tear fell down her cheek but after that Melanie tried not to think about it she went to sleep or at least tried too. and intrigued to see where this goes !!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ldscott Posted November 13, 2011 Report Share Posted November 13, 2011 I like this idea! Can't wait for an update! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted November 14, 2011 Report Share Posted November 14, 2011 Great start to this fanfiction Update soon xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chickiboomxx Posted November 15, 2011 Report Share Posted November 15, 2011 You've made a really good start and I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted December 20, 2011 Report Share Posted December 20, 2011 Chapter 2 Melanie was lying in bed looking at a photo of her mother that Heath had given her. A tear slid down her cheek Melanie didn’t even remember her mother she died in a car accident when Melanie was only a couple of days old. Melanie turned over and tried to sleep but she tried to picture Jack St Bride She shivered and wrapped the blanket around herself tighter. Melanie was not going to look for her father. Finally Melanie got to sleep Heath was looking at a picture of Darcy when Melanie. “I thought you we’re asleep” Heath said “I was but I kept having nightmares about my father” Melanie responded “Have you had any other nightmares?” Heath asked “Yeah of my mother’s car accident” Melanie responded Heath hugged her “Go back to bed sweetie” Heath said Melanie went back to bed and when she woke up no nightmares at all. Melanie looked at the clock it said 9: 30am Heath had let Melanie sleep it was holidays and she seemed like she needed it. Melanie came out of her room “Good morning sweetie” Heath said “Good morning Grandpa” Melanie responded “How would you like to go to your mother’s grave today?” Heath asked “I’d like that very much” Melanie said Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Inactive User Posted December 20, 2011 Report Share Posted December 20, 2011 Great chapter More soon please xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JosieTash Posted December 21, 2011 Report Share Posted December 21, 2011 LIKED that, especially............. Melanie was lying in bed looking at a photo of her mother that Heath had given her. A tear slid down her cheek Melanie didn’t even remember her mother she died in a car accident when Melanie was only a couple of days old. Melanie turned over and tried to sleep but she tried to picture Jack St Bride She shivered and wrapped the blanket around herself tighter. Melanie was not going to look for her father. “How would you like to go to your mother’s grave today?” Heath asked “I’d like that very much” Melanie said Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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