lozlovesh&a Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 Love it!! I also love that Jack & Martha are there as well as Bianca. Continue please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 You just made my morning. Jack!!!! I adore him and loved the chapter Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elikell Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 I didn't expect Charlie to be revealed as Ruby's mother this early in the story, but I'm loving it. I can't wait to see how not only Charlie reacts, but Ruby as well. Plus all the other people in Summer Bay too. It was a bit mean of Laura to just tell everyone about Charlie, but wow. Nice way to introduce everyone and bring everyone together. Looking forward to seeing where you take this. Please update soon xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 Your welcome for the comment I'm liking this a lot it's really good. Oh dear and Charlie's first day in the the bay was going so well untill she met Jenny wonder how everyone reacts I guess its good to have Jack and Martha but I never used to like them much in the show I thhink I am going to in this story through Well Done well written too Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ldscott Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 Really enjoyed the 1st couple of chapters! Great storyline and can't wait to see what Charlie is going to do next! Lisa x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danni02 Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 OOhhh Charlie met Brax And wow its been revealed already, I didnt expect that, but really looking forward to seeing what happens next! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted June 25, 2011 Report Share Posted June 25, 2011 Nice chapter there You are a great writer you are really good at writing how the characters feel Have a good drama class Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danni02 Posted June 25, 2011 Report Share Posted June 25, 2011 Aww Brax wanting to comfort Charlie already. sweet. hehe. Great update. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elikell Posted June 25, 2011 Report Share Posted June 25, 2011 Great update. I feel so sorry for Charlie. I can sense that the whole town will find out fairly soon about Charlie being Ruby's mother. Poor Charlie. She moved to a small town to start fresh, and its like she's been taken right back to the start again. Loved Martha's reaction as soon as Charlie was out of earshot, and how she automatically wanted to talk about it. Can't wait to see where you take this. Update soon please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ldscott Posted June 25, 2011 Report Share Posted June 25, 2011 That was great update, don't worry about it being short! Like the way Brax want to comfort her already!! Lisa x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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