pembie Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 Yay another fic from you Good start look forward to more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 Great start! Can't wait to read more soon xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dingo x Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 Good Start. Please update soon. xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dingo x Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 Yay Martha and Jack Great work. Please update again soon. xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 (edited) Great chapter. Liking it Whoa at the ending I don't think Jenny should have done that-letting it out in public that Charlie is Ruby's mother. She should have told Charlie that she is Ruby's mother in private instead of in public. Can't wait to see how the women react to her revelation! Update soon xx Edited June 24, 2011 by ~JarlieFanEver~ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chickiboomxx Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 Fabulous Start! I really enjoyed reading the first two chapters of your story. I can't wait to see where you take it. Update soon please! xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LauraPhilly!! Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 Yay Jack is in this fic! Love him so much! They're are not enough fics with Jack in them... Very good second chapter! I didn't expect everybody to find out so soon that Charlie is Ruby's Mum though! Looking forward to where you take this story! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighwayUnicorn Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 You're welcome for the comment I am loving this fic & you've even involved Jack, so thank you. Like Laura said, finding Jack in a fic nowadays is very rare. Wow, an intense second chapter with it being revealed that Charlie is Ruby's mum. I look forward to more though & seeing where you take this fic. Well done. Love Carina xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chester-Sam Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 Ahh she knows! I wonder what she's going to do about it? What's a slightly pissed off Ruby going to say Update soon! - Sam. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucii Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 Oooooh no! Love that Jack and Martha are still around with the more recent characters Can't wait for more x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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