Inactive User Posted October 13, 2011 Report Share Posted October 13, 2011 Great update Update soon xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JosieTash Posted October 13, 2011 Report Share Posted October 13, 2011 LOVIN’ it, especially ..... “Hayden stop sighing” Claire said “Sorry I’m more like my mum sensitive while you’re more like your dad don’t give a care in the world” Hayden responded Claire froze Hayden wasn’t sure what she just did. “May dad cares” Claire said Hayden sighed “Well we’re hot maybe we go get a job at a hotel” Claire responded “Not near a pool neither of us can swim” Hayden said Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted October 16, 2011 Report Share Posted October 16, 2011 Thanks for the comments here is the next chapter sorry it's short enjoy. Chapter 4 “Claire” I’m not staying here” Hayden said “It’s the other option we have” Claire responded “ This place is a dump” Hayden responded “Do you want to go home?” Claire asked “No” Hayden responded “Well then don’t complain this is the first place I found” Claire said “I don’t think anyone lives here” Hayden responded “Well of course not Hayden it’s an abounded warehouse” Claire told Hayden Hayden shivered Back in Summer Bay “I’m worried about Hayden” Ruby told Casey “I know you are I’m worried about her too” Casey responded “She’s only fourteen I hope she’s okay” Ruby responded “Watson is doing everything she can to find them” Charlie said “Aren’t you worried about Claire?” Ruby asked “Of course I’m worries about her she’s only fifteen” Charlie responded “We’re all worried all we can do is try and keep calm” Brax said “We’re trying” Charlie responded “I know” Brax said Back at the abounded warehouse “Hayden you’re right this place is a dump and creepy I can’t sleep” Claire said “Finally you agree with me and I can’t sleep either” Hayden responded “First thing tomorrow we’re looking for a job” Claire responded “Well the least we can do is try and get some sleep” Hayden said Claire turned to face the wall. Hayden waited but within minutes she knew Claire was asleep. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JosieTash Posted October 16, 2011 Report Share Posted October 16, 2011 LOVE the banter tween Hayden & Claire, especially …. “Hayden you’re right this place is a dump and creepy I can’t sleep” Claire said “Finally you agree with me and I can’t sleep either” Hayden responded Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted October 16, 2011 Report Share Posted October 16, 2011 Great chapter Liked the banter between Hayden and Claire Update soon xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cb2180 Posted October 16, 2011 Report Share Posted October 16, 2011 Great chapter loving Hayden and claire Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danni02 Posted October 16, 2011 Report Share Posted October 16, 2011 Great update! Like the banter with Claire and Hayden but feel for their parents! Hopefully the get found soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted October 18, 2011 Report Share Posted October 18, 2011 Thanks for all the comments here is the next chapter enjoy If you haven't read Teen Lust then you may not understood the part towards the end and the Gothca I got from a book I'm reading called The Truth about Forever by Sarah Dessen. Chapter 5 “Claire wake up” Hayden said “I’m up” Claire muttered “I know you’re not” Hayden responded Claire threw got out of the sleeping bag. “That’s better” Hayden said “We better get changed” Claire said Both girls got changed “We can’t go looking for jobs this place has no shower” Hayden said “I know” Claire responded Both girls picked up their stuff and started walking. “Claire I’m getting tired’ Hayden said “Me too” Claire responded Hayden was bored she wasn’t sure we’re Claire was then she heard a noise. “Gotcha” Claire said Hayden screamed Hayden hated this game but she was rather bored she hides behind a bush when she hears Claire. “Gotcha” Hayden said Claire screamed so loud and then she fell down the hill. Hayden started to freak out. “Claire very funny” Hayden said Hayden looked down and realized it wasn’t a joke “It’s not a joke” Claire responded “I know that now can you come back up?” Hayden asked “No I can’t even stand up” Claire responded ‘I’ll call mum” Hayden said “No” Claire responded “Well who should I call?” Hayden asked “Watson” Claire responded “Our parents probably put her on a missing person’s case” Hayden responded “I know mum wouldn’t want to take a missing person’s case when we’re involved” Claire said “Okay enough chatting” Hayden responded “Yes please call Watson” Claire said “What if she asks where we are?” Hayden asked “Well tell her we are near the abounded warehouse” Claire responded Hayden rung Watson “Hello?” Watsons asked “Hello this is Hayden Braxton” Hayden responded “Hayden we’re are you?” Watson asked “Well we’re near the abounded warehouse in the clearing” Hayden responded “Is everything okay?” Watson asked “Well no Claire is injured” Hayden responded “I’ll call an ambulance” Watson said Hayden waited “Are you still there?” Watson asked “Yes” Hayden replied “I’ve sent an ambulance” Watson said “Okay” Hayden responded “Can I speak with Claire?” Watson asked “She’s at the bottom of the clearing” Hayden responded “Never mind I’ll talk to her soon” Watson said “Claire the ambulance is on their way” Hayden said “I knew we’d have to go home sometime” Claire responded Hayden was sitting at the top of the clearing when she heard the ambulance siren. The ambulance put Claire on a stretcher. “Are you her sister” One of the officers asked “No Niece” Hayden responded “Aren’t you a bit young?” the other officer asked “No her older sister is my mother we we’re born two month apart” Hayden responded. Back at Summer Bay. “Claire don’t ever scare us like that again” Charlie said “I won’t running away was a dumb idea” Claire responded “You can talk to her soon we have to get her into X-ray” One of the nurses said Hayden looked scared “Hayden don’t ever scare us like that again” Ruby said “I won’t we shouldn’t off ran away” Hayden responded Casey hugged her. “What happened?” Ruby asked “Well we walked for a bit then we slept in the creepy abounded warehouse then we started walking again until we we’re in the clearing a bit past it and we started playing gotcha but my gotcha scared Claire so much she fell down the hill” Hayden responded She started to cry. “It’s okay” Ruby said “I’m sorry Hayden whispered Ruby hugged her. “Hi Charlie how is she?” Ruby asked “She will be fine” Charlie responded “Go ahead tell her what happened Hayden” Casey said “Well we walked for a bit then we slept in the creepy abounded warehouse then we started walking again until we we’re in the clearing a bit past it and we started playing gotcha but my gotcha scared Claire so much she fell down the hill” Hayden told Charlie “You hate that game” Charlie said “I know but I was bored I’m sorry” Hayden responded “Its okay she only has a facture” Charlie said “Have I ever been in this hospital before?” Hayden asked “Yes when you we’re born and then a few days after when you’re Uncle Brax fell down the stairs when Claire was two months and you we’re no less than a day old” Casey responded “I hate hospitals” Charlie said Ruby hugged her mother Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JosieTash Posted October 18, 2011 Report Share Posted October 18, 2011 COOOOL update .....GREAT that they are home, and the game of Gotcha was pretty cool [if painful for Claire] !!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted October 18, 2011 Report Share Posted October 18, 2011 Fab chapter Glad they are home Update soon xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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