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Ooh interesting story! Not sure I liked the sad ending, but I thought it was really well written and you captured bianca and heath perfectly! I could picture heath's expression easily when he looked at bianca with his "eyebrows furrowed", he does that look a lot! I guess this story should be a warning as to what an actual relationship might be like for them. Really good: )

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