EmyKate68 Posted September 22, 2011 Report Posted September 22, 2011 Ooh interesting story! Not sure I liked the sad ending, but I thought it was really well written and you captured bianca and heath perfectly! I could picture heath's expression easily when he looked at bianca with his "eyebrows furrowed", he does that look a lot! I guess this story should be a warning as to what an actual relationship might be like for them. Really good: ) Quote
Inactive User Posted September 22, 2011 Report Posted September 22, 2011 (edited) Ohhh such a great oneshot you had written really well!! I agree with EmyKate68's comment. Edited September 22, 2011 by ~JarlieFanEver~ Quote
teespazzr Posted September 23, 2011 Report Posted September 23, 2011 Great Start! I look forward to more! Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted September 23, 2011 Report Posted September 23, 2011 I liked that story, Laura. It was really well written and I loved the emotions you used in it. Very well written, well done. Carina xxx Quote
Zetti Posted September 23, 2011 Report Posted September 23, 2011 Oooh, I love Heath so I love reading one-shots with him in it and this one didnt disappoint, it was nice to see Heath struggling with something, it isnt a side of him you see that often so it was refreshing to see. Well done! xx Quote
Lucii Posted September 23, 2011 Report Posted September 23, 2011 Fantastic oneshot Laura although I do feel sorry for both Heath and Bianca It was nice seeing the different sides to them though xx Quote
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