Zetti Posted August 21, 2011 Report Posted August 21, 2011 So the sequel is here... I like the start to it.. I wonder what it is that Mattie is hiding.. and the reason for their return to Summer Bay.. This bit had me smiling... Ruby rolled her eyes slightly and took Charlie by the shoulders.“I hate to break this to you, Mum, but Romeo and I have been living together in Perth for the past six months.Anything that we hadn’t done before we left, I think we’ve got around to it by now.” Good start and I look forward to more Quote
JosieTash Posted August 21, 2011 Report Posted August 21, 2011 VERY intriguing, mysterious opener …. With the bonus of some GREAT lines ….. .“I hate to break this to you, Mum, but Romeo and I have been living together in Perth for the past six months. Anything that we hadn’t done before we left, I think we’ve got around to it by now.” “Come on, you must remember me, we were best friends for, like, a day.” “Yes.Right.Your casual boyfriend of seven months.Seven months of doing things with him and only him that a brother doesn’t want to think about.Except to pick up tips.I think to all the members of the human race that aren’t Indigo and Xavier, that’s known as going steady.Or don’t they call it that anymore?” Quote
lozlovesh&a Posted August 22, 2011 Report Posted August 22, 2011 Awesome!! I'm going to guess - Mattie was pregnant with Ric's baby but then had a miscarriage or something similar? And Ruby's pregnant? Don't know if I'm right. Please continue. Quote
Inactive User Posted August 22, 2011 Report Posted August 22, 2011 Yaayyyy a sequel!! Great start! Update soon xx Quote
pembie Posted August 22, 2011 Report Posted August 22, 2011 Good Start My guess is Romeo and Ruby have been trying for a baby but Ruby can't have kids so they have asked Mattie to have a baby for them? look forward to more Quote
Barbara Posted August 22, 2011 Report Posted August 22, 2011 Great start! Indi and Xavier have been together for 7 months! Dex is right: dating for 7 months is not a casual thing anymore, it's a relationship! At least, it is imo. I wonder if Xavier also still thinks it's a casual thing! I wonder why Ruby/Romeo and Mattie/Ric came back and what they have to tell their loved ones. I like the fact you brought back some older characters who barely or never interacted with the more recent characters. It'll be interesting to see how they'll all interact with each other. More please! Quote
Zetti Posted August 22, 2011 Author Report Posted August 22, 2011 Nicole sighed.“And the awkwardness begins.” As if it wasnt already awkward. I like the idea of them both being pregnant. Looking forward to more Quote
JosieTash Posted August 22, 2011 Report Posted August 22, 2011 LOVING it !!!!! ……Glad both families happy, AND it was a nice counterpoint ending the chapter about Indi. In the middle of ALL of that were some TERRIFIC moments ...... Ruby hesitated.“Sit down,”she suggested at last.Charlie took the seat opposite them and waited patiently. Ruby gripped Romeo’s hand even more tightly and he gave her a reassuring smile.She took a deep breath. “I’m pregnant.” “You’re what?”Alf demanded. Matilda sighed, glancing at Ric who gave her a supportive look.“I’m pregnant,”she repeated. Miles asked, from where he was stood nearby, a bowl of cereal having somehow appeared in his hand during the family conversation. “That’s one word for it,”Charlie agreed,“Did we forget the ‘Sex equals babies’ talk?” Ruby hadn’t felt so wrong-footed in a while.“That’s it?” Miles shook his head.“Don’t be silly, we gave him Cassie’s old room.Nicole got your room.” “That probably explains why we’re in a different room this time,”Matilda told her boyfriend. “I am definitely going to Perth,”Miles decided,“They’re obviously putting fertility drugs in the water Quote
lozlovesh&a Posted August 23, 2011 Report Posted August 23, 2011 Oooh well I was right about Ruby at least lol. Nice they are both pregnant and everyone seems happy about it (although don't know how Indi will react). continue please. Quote
Guest Posted August 23, 2011 Report Posted August 23, 2011 Great first chapter can't wait to read more Quote
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