Angel90 Posted August 12, 2011 Report Posted August 12, 2011 I love the mother/daugher relationship betwen Charlie and Ruby And Bianca and April were cute too Awwwww Poor Charlie... Feel so sorry for her... I wonder were Brax was... Not in any trouble i hope... Amazing chapter plz update soon
elikell Posted August 12, 2011 Report Posted August 12, 2011 Another wonderful chapter. Had to laugh at Bianca not remembering anything. Felt so sorry for Charlie, she has to deal with so much sometimes. Not sure about the choice in movie though, but glad that they watched it together. Ruby calling Charlie 'mum' was beautiful. Can't wait to see where you take this. Update soon please
HighwayUnicorn Posted August 12, 2011 Report Posted August 12, 2011 Dirty Dancing! Perfect! Another amazing chapter. I loved how you portrayed the emotions too. Brilliantly written, well done. Love Carina xxx
Chickiboomxx Posted August 13, 2011 Report Posted August 13, 2011 Great chapter! I really love this fan fiction so far! Looking forward to more! Please update soon xx
Inactive User Posted August 13, 2011 Report Posted August 13, 2011 Amazing chapter Awww loved Charlie and Ruby's mother-daughter moments Updare soon xx
soph1303 Posted August 14, 2011 Report Posted August 14, 2011 Great update, Aww poor Charlie, glad that Ruby was there to comfort her. Lol at Charlie telling Bianca that she hadn't done anything stupid Shame that Brax wasn't there when Charlie went to see him. Haha Ruby and Charlie watching Dirty dancing, and awwww Ruby called Charlie mum!!! More soon please
Lucii Posted August 15, 2011 Report Posted August 15, 2011 Thanks for the comments: wub: they are so lovely to read xx finally wrote about Heath I meant to do it like a few chapter's ago but I keep forgetting each time I write a new chapter! I hope you enjoy Ruby sat at school the next day desperately trying to study for the surprise English quiz that she forgot all about. She sat on her own at one of the benches in Summer Bay High sighing furiously and yawning wishing she didn’t stay up that late with Charlie last night. She smiled as she remembered the final scenes of Dirty Dancing and for the first time she felt close to Charlie as if they were more mother and daughter than ever before. She glanced up from her books and looked for her group of friends who were nowhere to be seen. She sighed again before becoming lost in her thoughts again. April Scott flung her backpack down next to Ruby making the young girl jump a little. April sat down folding her arms looking quite frustrated. She glanced at Ruby and smiled weakly. ”Hey April” Ruby closed her textbook and greeted her best friend. ”What’s up?” she noticed the girl frown and scribbling on a notepad furiously. ”Bianca. I just don’t get it everything I say or do is wrong...” April broke off with tears in her eyes. Ruby edged over to her and put her arm around the crying girl. ”Hey April shh” Ruby tried to console her with no luck. ”I’m sure it’s not that bad” ”It is. And worse. I made her breakfast this morning only for her to get really angry and say she doesn’t need looking after” ”Maybe she’s right” Ruby said and April sat up immediately. ”What do you mean?” ”Look I know she’s your sister and you’d do anything to protect her but if she wants to be left alone she should have the right to be. Someday soon she’s gonna want to talk and you’ll be there to listen” ”I know. But she seems to be spending so much more time at your place with your mum and I just feel like I’m losing her. Rubes she’s more than my sister infact she’s been the best motherly figure in my life. Am I being selfish?” ”Of course you’re not April but Bianca might feel that she needs time alone. When you went through OCD you never wanted Bianca near you and maybe now the roles have been reversed. Recovering takes time” April sniffed slightly and glanced up at Ruby who shot her a sympathetic smile and patted her on the back. ”I guess you’re right. I just wish there was something to take Bianca’s mind of things” Ruby’s eyes lit up for a second as April looked at Ruby with confusion in her eyes. ”Rubes what’s with the look?” ”Well if you insist on asking” Ruby giggled. ”I was thinking maybe we should go out to dinner sometime. Me, you, Bianca and mum. Mum and Bianca are close friends and so are me and you and it’d be a way to get mum and Bianca out of their pits of despair for a while. What do you say?” ”Rubes thats a great idea. What about tonight? I know me and Bianca aren’t doing anything what about you and Charlie?” ”No not that I’m aware of. Unless she’s out seeing her mystery boyfriend that is” April’s eyes widened as she grinned at Ruby. ”Oh my god who’s she seeing? Is it someone we know? How long?” Ruby laughed as she took out her phone from her backpack. ”There’s been no confirmation yet. I know that mum keeps sneaking out at night saying she’s working when she’s not so I’m just waiting to find out the guy who’s making her act like a teenager again. You know sometimes it's weird to think you're mum's getting more sex than you” The two girl’s laughed as Ruby began to text Charlie about tonight’s plans. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Meanwhile Charlie had made her way to the motel that Brax stayed in. He opened the door and took Charlie’s hand as he led her into the room and kissed her lightly on the forehead. Charlie sat down on the couch waiting for Brax to sit next to her. He did eventually as he slipped his arm round Charlie’s waist and nuzzled his head into her shoulder. ”How you doing?” he asked looking up into her eyes. ”As well as I can be I suppose” she replied as Brax kissed her cheek. ”I came to Angelo’s last night you weren’t there?” Brax shifted uncomfortably and looked down at the floor in guilt. Charlie sensed this and nudged him slightly. ”Where were you Brax?” Knowing that he couldn’t lie to her he decided to be honest at tell her the truth. Charlie took a hold of his hands to see his grazed knuckles and dropped them. ”You got in a fight?” Brax nodded and Charlie sighed. ”Who with?” ”Heath” Brax thought back to last night when he went home to Mangrove River to pay his share of the bills and pick up some more clothes. He arrived there to find Heath drinking beer and laughing at some crazed TV show like he hadn’t a care in the world and it angered Brax. He walked up to Heath with Bianca and Charlie in mind. ”Heath” he said as his brother turned to face him. ”D’ya mind? I’m tryna watch something here?” ”Yeah well I need to talk to you about something” ”Spit it out then” His coolness frustrated Brax, sometimes he really couldn’t understand his brother. Like Bianca and Charlie and the police and everyone else in the bay, Brax knew there was no proof. But he saw how close him and Bianca once were and he knew Heath had never liked a girl as much as he liked Bianca. ”Tell me you didn’t do it” ”Do what huh?” ”Rape Bianca” Heath spluttered on his beer and began laughing. ”You have got to be kidding me” ”Just answer the question Heath” ”You sound like the cops” Brax clenched his fists, not necessarily wanting to resort to violence so he tried to hold back from punching his kid brother. ”Why aren’t you answering the question” ”There’s no reason for you to be asking that question in the first place. I’m your brother surely you should know me” ”Well that’s the thing Heath ain’t it. Sometimes you don’t know someone at all” Heath stood up so him and Brax were face to face. Glaring into each other’s eyes, Brax’s anger reached a boiling point and he punched Heath over and over getting what he felt was justice for Charlie and Bianca. I didn’t do it. I swear” Heath said in between chokes and breaths. ”Get up Heath” Brax glared at his brother who lay on the floor. ”Now!” Heath staggered to his feet clutching his bloody nose as he tried to stop the blood. He looked at Brax in hurt and confusion wondering what the hell had come into his brother. Brax’s eyes remained emotionless. He punched Heath once more sending him to the floor and walked out the door.
Arielxo Posted August 15, 2011 Report Posted August 15, 2011 Awesome chapter. Poor Heath, always the one getting blame. Looking forward to the dinner that Ruby and April have planned. Bianca needs to have some fun. Update sooooon
lozlovesh&a Posted August 15, 2011 Report Posted August 15, 2011 aw, I like how the girls thought the best way would be they all have dinner together.... Brax beating up Heath! although I don't think he was the one to do it. Continue please.
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