soph1303 Posted September 17, 2011 Report Posted September 17, 2011 Great update, Liked the whole Brax/Heath scene. Especially the bit where Brax was thinking about how all the Braxton brothers had never been in love before and now they all are . Even Heath . I'm glad that Heath didn't rape Bianca, I didn't think that he had. More soon please
Inactive User Posted September 18, 2011 Report Posted September 18, 2011 Great chapter Update soon xx
Lucii Posted September 18, 2011 Report Posted September 18, 2011 Thanks for the comments guys...If I have time I'll post again later if not then it's going to be a while sorry xxx
Lucii Posted September 23, 2011 Report Posted September 23, 2011 Thanks so much for the comments they are all so lovely to read x Hope you enjoy this chapter x ”So what was so important you had to drag me away from the huge grins I kept receiving of your delightful daughter?” Bianca grinned as she sipped her coffee. Charlie grinned awkwardly, her face almost instantly frowning. Bianca titled her head. ”Charles?” ”Sorry I...I erm” Charlie frowned, lines appearing across her forehead as she did so. She tried a million different ways to tell Bianca in her head on her way but now the reality hut her she wasn’t sure she could go through with it. ”I thought you said you had something important to tell me?” Bianca shrugged, taking a bite of her sandwich. Noticing Charlie’s lack of eye contact she called out once more. ”Earth to Charlie?” ”Can we go to the beach?” Charlie glanced around the crowded diner full of locals. Indi and Romeo sat just a few tables away with Dex, April, Ruby, Xavier and Robin across the other side of the room. In the nearby distance they could hear Coleen’s mutterings and Irene’s sighs of exasperation. No the diner was way too crowded for Charlie’s liking. Bianca on the other hand had a different idea. ”Charlie come on” Sighing, Charlie beckoned Bianca closer. Looking her in the eye, she took her hands before breathing a huge sigh of relief. ”Heath Braxton didn’t rape you” ”You what?” Bianca spluttered spraying a small mouthful of coffee over Charlie. ”Heath Braxton...He didn’t” ”I heard you Charlie” Bianca helf her head in her hands as she processed the information her best friend told her. She fought back the tears, not only of sorrow but also relief. In a way she was glad it wasn’t him. Only now... ”So who was it?” She asked hopefully which made Charlie feel guilty. She bit her lip, preparing to prepare Bianca for the worse. ”I’m sorry Bee...It’s back to square one” Bianca nodded, glanced at Charlie and tried to smile. The progress she had made had gone. She herself was back to square one, in denial, not being able to trust any man who spoke to her. Standing up suddenly she made her excuses. ”I’m going to go for a walk on the beach” She spoke casually, but inside her mind raced with a thousand questions. Her eyes blinked back so many tears that Bianca just needed to release. ”Do you want me to come with you?” Charlie’s reply was met by a shake of Bianca’s head. ”I just need to be alone Charles. Thanks for telling me though” she smiled leaving the diner. Charlie noticed April glancing her way, having notice her sisters abrupt exit. Charlie smiled at April who smiled the same way Bianca did. Sighing heavily, Charlie rose too, checked her watch and headed back to work. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Brax banged his fist against the bar at Angelo’s. They’d opened more than an hour now and still not a single customer had walked through that door. Staff were useless, lazy and never did their job properly. He’d put his own brother in a hospital bed. His other brother was barely speaking to him because of the whole Heath mess. Charlie had bailed on him once more, claiming she couldn’t meet him so he was working again tonight. And to top it off, Roman was back in town. ”Darryl Braxton” Brax glanced up to see a wide-grinning Roman Harris standing cockily in the walkway. ”Long time no see eh?” He began his side taking giant steps until he reached the other side. The grin never disappeared of his face. ”My oh my hasn’t somebody done good since leaving Mangrove River. But then again you should have with all my boys’ crops. Shudda made atleast a few grand on that ey Braxton?” His smile disappeared and turned to an evil type angry look. ”And we all know what happens when people take my stuff and run he grabbed Brax by his t-shirt and twisted it around. Brax gulped, closing his eyes in fear as Roman’s other hand rose to strike him. ”And with everything else you’ve done Braxton, you still find enough time to screw my little sister and niece over” ”STOP” Tegan Callaghan’s voice interrupted them. ”Roman please don’t hit him. It won’t do him any good or you then the cops will get involved...” Roman smirked at Tegan’s references to the cops. ”Well a little birdie told me that you and Charlie Buckton have been getting busy under the sheets. What can I say, with both me and you...bad boys must be her type” He sighed following Tegan’s command and releasing him. Brax breathed heavily before taking a step back. ”How do you know Charlie?” ”Exactly the same way you do. And I don’t think her bosses or anyone in Summer Bay is gonna be too impressed when they find out she’s been sleeping with the town’s bad boy” ”Me and a copper?” Brax spluttered. ”Get a grip Roman” Behind him Tegan shook her head and sighed. Roman glanced around to his little sister. ”Either than or my eyes are deceiving me” He reached into his pocket and flung a disk towards Brax who studied it closely before dropping it onto the bar. ”Barbie and the Swan Lake. Good choice Roman” ”That’s Darcy’s” Roman fumbled around in his pocket once more before producing a plain white disk. ”And what’s this eh? The sequel?” ”No that’s my evidence?” ”Of what exactly?” ”You and Charlie pashing the dear life out of one another” He grinned before taking a step closer to Brax. ”Now I wouldn’t want to just leave this lying around the bay for anyone to find or even the diner. Who knows who could find it? Coleen? Or maybe if it’s my lucky day somebody could hand it into the police” ”Roman please don’t do this?” ”You really have gone soft haven’t you Braxton? Must be the cop effect” ”What do you want from me?” Roman glanced around at Angelo’s. ”This isn’t a bad place is it? If you gave me this place and started a new life, away from Charlie and away from my little sister who has to endure your latest bed buddies when she’s been raising a child on her own for the past decade. Take your River boys, leave the bay, leave Mangrove River and never look back” ”And if I don’t?” Brax asked as Roman took a step closer to him. The taller guy dominated Brax but both glared at one another just a few centimetres apart. ”Everyone will begin to see you as the pathetic low life you really are. As soon as Buckton sees you’re true colours she’ll drop you so fast you’ll break every bone in your body” He smirked before continuing. ”That’s if I don’t break em first” He turned around grabbing Tegan firmly by the arm and leading her out. Tegan looked behind at Brax, her big eyes pleading for his forgiveness. As soon as they were out of his sight Brax took out his phone to text Charlie. Need to talk to you. Know I can’t see you tonight but tomorrow? Every second felt like a lifetime until Charlie texted back. Brax poured himself a large whisky and downed it neat. Finally his phone beeped. Shuddering a little from the effect of the whisky Brax opened the message. Not working tomorrow morning. Come to Leah’s? Brax found himself nodding although there was no one around to see. He placed his phone back on the counter and poured himself another whisky. He downed it and shuddered once more. Suddenly he felt the anger boil over in his body, his muscle’s clenched and he frowned in frustration. He flung the glass against the wall watching it shatter in to a million pieces and more. What could he do now? He just didn’t know.
Inactive User Posted September 23, 2011 Report Posted September 23, 2011 Great chapter. Update soon xx
JosieTash Posted September 23, 2011 Report Posted September 23, 2011 COOOOOL update, especially …… Charlie glanced around the crowded diner full of locals. Indi and Romeo sat just a few tables away with Dex, April, Ruby, Xavier and Robin across the other side of the room. In the nearby distance they could hear Coleen’s mutterings and Irene’s sighs of exasperation. No the diner was way too crowded for Charlie’s liking. Bianca on the other hand had a different idea. Bianca nodded, glanced at Charlie and tried to smile. The progress she had made had gone. She herself was back to square one, in denial, not being able to trust any man who spoke to her. ”Well a little birdie told me that you and Charlie Buckton have been getting busy under the sheets. What can I say, with both me and you...bad boys must be her type” He sighed following Tegan’s command and releasing him. Brax breathed heavily before taking a step back. ”Everyone will begin to see you as the pathetic low life you really are. As soon as Buckton sees you’re true colours she’ll drop you so fast you’ll break every bone in your body” He smirked before continuing. ”That’s if I don’t break em first”
lozlovesh&a Posted September 24, 2011 Report Posted September 24, 2011 Great chapter... continue soon.
soph1303 Posted September 24, 2011 Report Posted September 24, 2011 Great chapter, Aww, I feel sorry for Bianca, knowing that the police are back at square one as to who her attacker is. But she needed to know though. I'm a little confused as to why Brax is scared of Roman. Is Roman supposed to be like an ex-riverboy or drug dealer or something? !! Roman wouldn't really expose Charlie and Brax's secret would he? Roman is so evil in this fic!! More soon please
Lucii Posted September 24, 2011 Report Posted September 24, 2011 Great chapter, Aww, I feel sorry for Bianca, knowing that the police are back at square one as to who her attacker is. But she needed to know though. I'm a little confused as to why Brax is scared of Roman. Is Roman supposed to be like an ex-riverboy or drug dealer or something? !! Roman wouldn't really expose Charlie and Brax's secret would he? Roman is so evil in this fic!! More soon please Something like that Kinda like Jake atm except a whole more complicated as he's Tegan's half brother x I'll try my best to update tonight while im in the writing mood and I've got no revision to do. I've kinda planned the story out and everything just not wrote the chapters and there isn't really that long to go with either fics. I think Sworn to Secrecy will be finished first as I still have some ideas for this first x
Inactive User Posted September 24, 2011 Report Posted September 24, 2011 Great chapter, Aww, I feel sorry for Bianca, knowing that the police are back at square one as to who her attacker is. But she needed to know though. I'm a little confused as to why Brax is scared of Roman. Is Roman supposed to be like an ex-riverboy or drug dealer or something? !! Roman wouldn't really expose Charlie and Brax's secret would he? Roman is so evil in this fic!! More soon please Something like that Kinda like Jake atm except a whole more complicated as he's Tegan's half brother x I'll try my best to update tonight while im in the writing mood and I've got no revision to do. I've kinda planned the story out and everything just not wrote the chapters and there isn't really that long to go with either fics. I think Sworn to Secrecy will be finished first as I still have some ideas for this first x Awesome What about your two other fanfictions (When I look at you and Unbroken)? Are you going to continue them or not? I noticed you had written two Changelo fanfictions (in the Vault). I commented on one of them (Taking Chances)
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