Perfectly Imperfect, But I Wouldn't Change A Thing (by Jen) - comments

[pembie]

I like the way this is written it's like we are seeing things happen as the characters do bit like when we dream hope that makes sense

keep writing want to see where you take this

[Red Ranger 1]

Wow, that was a really great opening and I like the way you write the characters.Curious to know where it's all going to go.

[Miranda]

Naughty naughty

But its good though, well written as your fics always are. I can tell Indi and Romeo are younger in this fic, not as worldly wise as at present. I feel a bit concerned about them tho, its not a good idea to have sex with your best friend, not that I'd know anything about that sort of thing

Sid and Marilyn married, hm. Obviously a year ago this seemed great but now after all that's happened, not sure...

Edited June 4, 2011 by Miranda

[HighwayUnicorn]

I liked the opening to this fic already & how you introduced the characters & their emotions.

It was written brilliantly, well done. I look forward to seeing where you take this.

Love Carina xxx

[Zetti]

Mmmm, Sid and Marilyn.. that is just strange to me but who knows it could work.

I apologise, I was trying to comment this morning but my iPod decided it wasnt going to let me.

I like the idea and the starting to it.

Well done x

[Jen]

Thank you so much for the positive feedback, guys.

pembie - Thank you for reading. I'm glad you liked the first part.

Red Ranger -

Miranda - I was debating whether to post this at all, because it was totally written last year and you can sort of tell -- not just with the characters, but my writing as wel.. *sigh* It's so weird reading it back and realising just how much it doesn't fit with the show anymore. Is this now an AU? *shrug*

Carina - Thank you.

Zetti - I hope you can stick with the story. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Next part up shortly.

[Miranda]

AAAAAAAAaaaaaaaahhh! Indi's pregnant? Come on Romeo, man up for this!

This is an AU Jen, but a very good one

[Red Ranger 1]

Oh...my...god.Dexter talking about giraffe sex is one of those bonkers things that only he would do. When Indi started throwing up I wondered if she might be pregnant and...yep.And she told Romeo in a text which literally had me laughing out loud.Loving this, really want to read more, so what if the show's passed it by a bit?

[HighwayUnicorn]

Loved that chapter ... I am loving the direction you are taking this too. Indi's pregnant!

Once again, loved the character portrayal of Indi, Romeo & Dex.

Well done, amazingly written & I look forward to more, continue soon please.

Love Carina xxx

[Zetti]

Loved it.

She's pregnant. Never expected that.