smokinace Posted July 4, 2011 Report Share Posted July 4, 2011 title - Reality Bites type of story - med / long fic genre - drama rating - A Cast - The Walker Family plus a new Riley Dainer spoilers - no warnings - language, sexual references, adult themes plots - A new guy comes to town with a connection to the Walker family. CHAPTER 1 Colleen watched in disgust as a guy she didn't recognize flicked ash from his cigarette in to the empty tips jar in the diner. "You can't smoke in here" Colleen snapped "Well, why do have an ashtray?" the guy asked "It's not an ashtray it's a tips jar? she replied "This is a tip jar, then why is it empty?" he asked her "It wasn't 10 minutes ago" she said angrily The guy blew a smoke ring in her face and put his threw his cigarette in the coffee she was holding. "Well, it looks like i'm mistaken" he said "I think you should go" Colleen snapped "Well before i do can you tell me where i can find Sid Walker?" he asked CHAPTER 2 UP SOON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighwayUnicorn Posted July 4, 2011 Report Share Posted July 4, 2011 Wondering who this guy is ... Colleen was brilliant standing up to him! I look forward to seeing where you take this. Love Carina xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elikell Posted July 4, 2011 Report Share Posted July 4, 2011 I like Colleen standing up to this man. She really meant business. I'm very interested to see where you take this. And who the man is. Please update soon. This looks like it could get interesting! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miranda Posted July 4, 2011 Report Share Posted July 4, 2011 I've an idea who this man is, but I don't want to write it in case I'm right and it gives it away Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
smokinace Posted July 5, 2011 Report Share Posted July 5, 2011 CHAPTER 2 Sid sat on the verander reading the newspaper, he looked up when he heard the step creak and saw a tall dark haired good looking boy standing there carrying a backpack on his back "Ah, can i help you?" Sid asked The guy just stood staring for a while before speakling "Um, are you Sid Walker?" he asked "Yeah that's me, something i can help with?" Sid replied "You can start by telling why you left" the boy said Sid frowned "I'm sorry have we ever met?" Sid asked The boy wiped a tear out of his eye then laughed sarcasticly. "You know, i came here because i thought mum was lying but she was right you are a total jerk" The boy said angrily "Your mu... i have no idea who you are, what's your name?" Sid said grabbed his arm as he turned to walk away. "Riley" The boy said "Do you have a last name?" Sid asked "Dainer" Riley replied "Oh" Sid replied CHAPTER 3 UP SOON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elikell Posted July 5, 2011 Report Share Posted July 5, 2011 Can't wait to see what Sid has to say for himself. Looks like his past may be about to come back and haunt him! Looking forward to more. Update soon please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighwayUnicorn Posted July 6, 2011 Report Share Posted July 6, 2011 Another amazing chapter. Really interesting so far & I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
smokinace Posted July 8, 2011 Report Share Posted July 8, 2011 CHAPTER 3 "Take a seat, make yourself at home" Sid said to Riley after inviting him in "No thanks, i just wanna know why you left" Riley replied "I was a different person back then, i was young and didn't want kids" Sid told him "Mum blamed me" Riley told him "What do you mean?" Sid asked "For you leaving, she even cut my wrist, see" he said holding in arm out "Jill did this?" Sid asked "Yeah, she changed completly after you left" "Do you have anywhere to stay? because you're welcome to stay here" Sid said "No, it's way too late to play happy families, i just wanted see who you were" Riley told him CHAPTER 4 UP SOON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighwayUnicorn Posted July 8, 2011 Report Share Posted July 8, 2011 That was an interesting update ... I look forward to seeing where you take this. Looking forward to the next update. Love Carina xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elikell Posted July 9, 2011 Report Share Posted July 9, 2011 Very interesting indeed. Poor Riley. Not sure if I should feel sorry for him or not, but at the moment I do. Should be interesting to see where you take this. Please update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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