HighwayUnicorn Posted June 24, 2011 Report Posted June 24, 2011 You're only making this a one shot? Why not carry it on ... ? A great one shot though saying that. Loved the dialogue between Heath & Bianca. & I loved the opening line as well. Well done. Love Carina xxx Quote
elikell Posted June 25, 2011 Report Posted June 25, 2011 Loved this. Very interesting. It was a much nicer way for Bianca and Heath to meet. Loved it all immesnsely, the dialogue, the emotions, the descriptions. Well done Quote
Perry Posted June 25, 2011 Report Posted June 25, 2011 Bianca's a whore other then that I enjoyed it immensely. It was very well written and am saddened it was only a oneshot it would be good for Bianca to redeem herself. Quote
lozlovesh&a Posted June 25, 2011 Report Posted June 25, 2011 Hmmmm. I agree with her that Heath is hot but that's just about all... I don't like his character all that much... yet. I'm to invested in Liam & Bianca though lol. But it was a good one shot. Quote
pembie Posted June 25, 2011 Report Posted June 25, 2011 Bianca you got over Liam fast I really liked that one shot well done Quote
Zetti Posted June 25, 2011 Report Posted June 25, 2011 Thanks everyone I never knew so many would want me to write more. I am currently writing a new fic set straight after this one so watch this space. h Quote
Miranda Posted June 25, 2011 Report Posted June 25, 2011 Loved the way you used the actual dialogue betweent Brax/Heath and Bianca/Heath, then took it in another direction than those scenes actually went. I agree that Heath is probably not as tough as he seems, Bianca is tougher Quote
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