Fatal Attraction

[HighwayUnicorn]

Wow ... another brilliant update ... and very long too!

Another fantastic chapter and I look forward to more.

Well done.

Carina xxx

[teespazzr]

Best Fanfiction Ever!

[Inactive User]

Great chapter

Can't wait to see how Ruby's friends and everyone are gonna react that their loved one is safe and alive.

Update soon xx

[Dingo x]

Amazing chapter.

The next update looks great.

xx

[JosieTash]

Too many superlatives just aren’t enough for this fic. Beyond LOOOOOOOOOOVE it !!!!!!!! ……especially ………

 Treat it like any other missing persons case and be professional. In a situation like this she needed to think rationally. Not for her sake but for Ruby's. If her daughter stood any chance of being found it was depending on Charlie keeping a cool head and focussing on tracking her down. Not by getting into a shoot out with every dodgy looking gang member that she came across along the way.

 I'm doin' it because I love Charlie. And I will do anythin' to get Ruby back for her. But this isn't about me. Why are you doin' this?", Brax hated to admit it, but he was suspicious of Heath's motives. There was a growing concern in him that Heath was after getting himself in trouble. "Heath answer me!", he shouted. "BECAUSE I LOVE HER ALRIGHT!", Heath shouted back. Flooring his older brother with his admission. "I love her. But I'm not stupid. I know she's Casey's. But I can do this. I don't care if I have to beat every last one of 'em to death, I will find her", Heath said as he clenched his fists and stared at his brother with a look of intent.

 Geoff never spoke unkindly of anyone he didn't know personally, but he couldn't help himself. He was angry and as far as he was concerned he needed to blame someone. The Braxtons were the closest he was going to get to Brodie. Noticing the sadness in Casey's eyes Geoff softened and found himself feeling bad for him.

 Brodie said with an evil grin as he stroked the inside of Ruby's leg. Fulling repulsed and fearing what he would do if she stayed still, Ruby raised her knee and sent it crashing into Brodie's groin area. "Owwww. Stupid bitch!", he roard as he sent a backhand across her face splitting her lip.

 "RUBY", she exclaimed as she crashed to her knees next to her daughter. Her emotions going into overdrive as she burst into tears with relief. Her daughter was alive

 "The knuckle head shot himself. He said somethin' 'bout his part in the game being done and not bein' able to face jail so he pulled the gun on himself",

 "I can't. I'm sorry. I just, I can't think about eating or drinking until I know Ruby's alright", she said as she placed her head in her hands. Brax nodded his. "Yeah I get that. But your gonna be no used to Ruby if your passed out on a hospital bed next to her when she wakes eh", he said.

 Charlie grabbed a hold of Ruby's hand. Lifting it up she placed a kiss on it and held it tight. "I love you so much", she said. Thankful that the game was family over. Or at least that's what she thought...

[Claire_Blake]

Brilliant update. So well written. Really enjoying it, can't wait for the next update.

[Red Ranger 1]

Woah.Charlie, Brax and Heath heading out tooled up was dramatic but it's good they found Ruby. Geoff and Casey's little rivalry was nice too.Hopefully Ruby will be all right but that preview sounds like there's more to come...

[lollypop]

Thanks everyone. I appreciate all the comments. The next chapter won't be quite as long so I may get an update typed up by tonight or tomorrrow, so stay tuned. And thanks again for all your reviews.

[Chester-Sam]

A-MAZ-ING! I love this fic!

You have me gripped here, I'm contantly looking forward to the next chapter

Love the Charlie/Ruby scenes, can't wait for more.

- Sam!

[lollypop]

Just started the next chapter, however I will be away for most of the day tomorrow and I have an early start so I don't have time to finish it tonight. Will try get an update up tomorrow night!! Thanks for the comments!!