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“In the soft unwanting to be harmed flesh.”

I love that line! It really made me laugh & it was just so in character. Seriously well done!

It was so fantastically written & a lovely one shot.

The ending was good as well.

A nice fic & I really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Love Carina xxx :wub:

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Haha, well done :D Did you see what I wrote about a ship name for these two on your other fanfic thread? teehee. That was before I read this fic though, so it probably sounds a bit silly now :P

The other thing was, dare I say it, does the title have a double meaning? :P

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REALLY enjoyed this fic !!! ...especially .....

“My sexuality or whatever?” Dexter scoffed. “I’m not gay.”

“Dude you are so gay.” Heath snorted. “You do those blogs, you wear pink shirts and those short shorts and you dress in women’s clothes.”

“So what? You don’t seem to own a shirt and say ‘dude’ but you’re not a Ninja turtle.”

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Dude! Oh man, this fic is everything I adore about Dex fics. His quick wit, and his blogs, and everyone thinking he's gay. And then you added bonus Heath, who I haven't read much of in fics, and he was just this wonderful contrast to Dex's naivity. *saves in memories*

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The other thing was, dare I say it, does the title have a double meaning? :P

Yeah it purposefully does :P nice of you to pick that up.

Thanks everyone for all your comments it is muchly appreciated.

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