xGlowingAngelx Posted May 13, 2011 Report Share Posted May 13, 2011 OK, Don't get me wrong, I did love the whole thing, but I just have to say first: This: He would do anything he could to shield her from the pain that Marilyn would surely enact on her. ... just made the whole fic. Bless him! I loved how Angelo & Roo were just so abrupt about the fact she should just keep the baby! LOL. A wonderful start, Zetti. I can't wait to see where you go with it xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danni02 Posted May 13, 2011 Report Share Posted May 13, 2011 Oooh I loved that! Great start and I am looking forward to more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighwayUnicorn Posted May 13, 2011 Report Share Posted May 13, 2011 I just loved that first part. It was so well written & I really look forward to seeing how you continue this & where you take it. Well done. I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miranda Posted May 13, 2011 Report Share Posted May 13, 2011 Good, a longer fic about Niccelo I can see why Marilyn wants the baby, but I don't think she should have Nicole's. She should have another baby from an adoption agency/wherever. Yes I agree about the line about Angelo doing anything to shield her from the pain, bless him Looking forward to more of this Zetti Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrsRosetta Posted May 13, 2011 Report Share Posted May 13, 2011 Lovely!cant wait for more! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted May 13, 2011 Report Share Posted May 13, 2011 Great fanfiction Loved it Update soon xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted May 13, 2011 Report Share Posted May 13, 2011 Amy: Thanks! I really am glad you liked it x Danni02: Thanks so much! x Carina: Thankies Miranda: Thanks hun x MrsRosetta: Appreciate the comment x Sarah: Thanks! I appreciate all the comments and readers. I hope to update this again over the weekend x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lozlovesh&a Posted May 14, 2011 Report Share Posted May 14, 2011 Great start. Please continue. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted May 14, 2011 Report Share Posted May 14, 2011 Thanks Loz! I am so glad to have some many readers I will be updating tonight should I get a chance x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighwayUnicorn Posted May 14, 2011 Report Share Posted May 14, 2011 So the fight is far from over ... I hope Nicole can stay strong though. Rob Another amazing chapter & I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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