Inactive User Posted May 25, 2011 Report Posted May 25, 2011 Wow amazing oneshot you had written so far! Great work. Loved how you wrote Ruby's emoticons and thoughts so beautifully and how Charlie is there for her. And I loved the moment between them at the end Well done! Quote
Danni02 Posted May 25, 2011 Report Posted May 25, 2011 wow, I loved that. You really wrote Ruby's thoughts and feelings well! I loved how you had Ruby refering to what she done in the past but that Charlie was still there for her and would do anything. The end scene with Charlie and Ruby was short and sweet, but had everything it needed. It was lovely. Great one-shot. Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted May 25, 2011 Report Posted May 25, 2011 Wow, that was brilliant! I loved it! Loved the part with Ruby & Charlie. I must admit, I was going through loads of people in Summer Bay & did wonder if it was Ruby so I kind of guessed right Along with various other names. But it was fitting how you wrote it, with Charlie's involvement & how she would feel, etc. Amazing, brilliant, perfectly written & fantastically portrayed emotions. Love Carina xxx Quote
pembie Posted May 25, 2011 Report Posted May 25, 2011 This one shot is very good You had me guessing who the person was right up to the end The emotions and feelings were wrote really well Well Done Quote
Zetti Posted May 25, 2011 Report Posted May 25, 2011 The emotions were really well written and emotional. I loved how she thought she was pregnant and then she was sad that she wasn't Loved it Quote
Miranda Posted May 25, 2011 Report Posted May 25, 2011 Really good story. This will strike a chord with most of the female sex, I think. I must admit I guessed it was Ruby because she is the only one with a mother present, out of the current teen girls. The other ones have absent mums. So really, Ruby is lucky to have her mum around. I can't really believe she didn't have a pregnancy scare in the series after the Romeo and Casey fiasco. It was poignant how she was disappointed at the end, but probably better for her. Who knows. Who can say what is best for people Quote
elikell Posted May 26, 2011 Report Posted May 26, 2011 Thanks to you all for your comments. I am so thankful for the time you have given to read my oneshot. I'm glad you liked it Quote
JosieTash Posted May 26, 2011 Report Posted May 26, 2011 LOVED this ….. think I would have loved it no matter who the person was, but ADORED that it was Ruby !!!! Quote
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