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You actually just made me cry ... I loved it. The fact that there were twists just added dramatically to it as well ... it was written so beautifully, perfectly.

I loved the way it ended, so amazingly well written. Really well done.

Amazing, perfect detail, emotions, characterisation, etc, just everything.

Love Carina xxx :wub:

Posted

this is really cool liked the supernatral element to it

You actually just made me cry ... I loved it. The fact that there were twists just added dramatically to it as well ... it was written so beautifully, perfectly.

I loved the way it ended, so amazingly well written. Really well done.

Amazing, perfect detail, emotions, characterisation, etc, just everything.

Love Carina xxx :wub:

Amazing one-shot you had written :o And I agree with Carina's comment above ^^ It's really good :)

I am so glad that you all liked it. Your comments always make me want to write more :)

:wub:

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I liked it the first time I read it and this version is better. You're like me, you keep fiddling with your stories :wink:

:lol: Thanks. I had to fiddle with it :) x

  • QUIET ACHIEVER changed the title to The Unexpected (by Zetti) - comments

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