Red Ranger 1 Posted March 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2011 Ooh, complicated.Aden and Belle seem to fancy each other but she's dating his brother, Heath isn't prepared to let Nicole go but she's, um, dating his brother...(Nice bit of symmetry there.)Aden and Heath being friends is going to make things interesting, so will Belle working at the school.Liked the little chat between Nicole and Brax. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted March 23, 2011 Report Share Posted March 23, 2011 Oooh ... Aden asked Belle out for a meal I loved that chapter, amazingly written & I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx Thanks Carina. Appreciate that x Oh thanks, Zetti, I'm overwhelmed Great chapter too, making Aden friends with Heath will bring the two stories together I can't see what's going to happen in this story, which is great Thanks Heath and Aden will be featured a lot more in couple of chapters time. Ooh, complicated.Aden and Belle seem to fancy each other but she's dating his brother, Heath isn't prepared to let Nicole go but she's, um, dating his brother...(Nice bit of symmetry there.)Aden and Heath being friends is going to make things interesting, so will Belle working at the school.Liked the little chat between Nicole and Brax. Thanks Red, I was going for the symmetry as well. Nice to see you picked up on it Thanks to all of you for the comments and to all who read it. It means a lot x I should be updating tonight if not tomorrow Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miranda Posted March 23, 2011 Report Share Posted March 23, 2011 Ahem, I picked up on the symmetry too, see my first reply Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted March 23, 2011 Report Share Posted March 23, 2011 Ahem, I picked up on the symmetry too, see my first reply Oops so you did Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miranda Posted March 23, 2011 Report Share Posted March 23, 2011 (edited) Ahem, I picked up on the symmetry too, see my first reply Oops so you did hahahahaha! Good idea of yours to have the symmetry. And of course, the clue is in the title! Edited March 23, 2011 by Miranda Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted March 23, 2011 Report Share Posted March 23, 2011 Thanks Miranda I appreciate that its nice to know that people like the idea. After all, if there are no readers then there is no point writing the fic Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miranda Posted March 23, 2011 Report Share Posted March 23, 2011 After all, if there are no readers then there is no point writing the fic Exactly!! That's why I'm pleased I get comments on mine too. Lets just be a mutual admiration society, dahling, mwah mwah :lol: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adellejefferiesxox Posted March 24, 2011 Report Share Posted March 24, 2011 Well done Zetti!!! What I love about this chapter is the realism. The situations are so realistic, with the gardening, cooking, cleaning, Belle checking Aden out quitely, and Aden noticing Belle too. It's sweet Aden asked Belle out. I'm loving this fic!! Please don't keep us in suspense for too long. I love how Aden and Belle in the mind fancy each other. I wonder if Justin will catch on, or whether Aden/Belle will notice that the other has feelings for them. Update soooooon!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted March 24, 2011 Report Share Posted March 24, 2011 Thanks for the comments I am working on the next chapter but I cant seem to get the words out of my head and on the page. It might not be up until tonight or tomorow. I appreciate your patience. Bear with me Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miranda Posted March 24, 2011 Report Share Posted March 24, 2011 Ooh, this is so exciting, what is going on here? Belle related to Irene, a mysterious man who's hurt Casey in the past. Poor Casey, he's obviously been through a lot in his life. There is a good balance here between romance (Aden and Belle) and drama (Casey, Brax, Charlie). I get the feeling Aden and Belle will soon be looking at each other in a different way. Lovely dress she is wearing! 'poking at a ready meal' Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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