lozlovesh&a Posted December 5, 2010 Report Share Posted December 5, 2010 Ooh interesting. I like it. Continue plesae. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighwayUnicorn Posted December 5, 2010 Report Share Posted December 5, 2010 Oh yay! I was looking forward to you posting this. I enjoyed that first chapter. I hope you do continue with it. Love Carina xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
isadora66 Posted December 5, 2010 Report Share Posted December 5, 2010 Oh, it's good! I love the length of the sentences, nice fluency The different perspectives are interesting. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted December 5, 2010 Report Share Posted December 5, 2010 Thanks guys I am so glad that you three like it. I will try and update for tomorrow. Thanks again x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
biancaliamca Posted December 5, 2010 Report Share Posted December 5, 2010 got my hopes up then ;) update soonn millicent x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted December 5, 2010 Report Share Posted December 5, 2010 Aww sorry millicent I will try and get an update up for tomorrow Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted December 8, 2010 Report Share Posted December 8, 2010 (edited) Sorry for the double post.. I will try and update tomorrow. Chapter is halfway there... just need a bit more. Sorry to those who think that this is an update.. Edited December 9, 2010 by QUIET ACHIEVER Removal of Sneak Peek/Teaser. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighwayUnicorn Posted December 8, 2010 Report Share Posted December 8, 2010 (edited) Oh man, thought it was an update as well. xxx Edited December 9, 2010 by QUIET ACHIEVER Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
isadora66 Posted December 9, 2010 Report Share Posted December 9, 2010 Whoot! Great chapter! The progress and dialogue seems realistic, a great plus. You're the best writer on Bianca/Liam fanfics right now, no doubt about it! What is Vittorio up to? And how caught up in Xavier is April? I love unresolved questions. Good job Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighwayUnicorn Posted December 9, 2010 Report Share Posted December 9, 2010 Another brilliant chapter. Well done. Great effort & I like the sound of the preview too. Love Carina xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Join the conversation
You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.