Unhappy Ending (by Zetti) - comments

[lozlovesh&a]

Ooh interesting. I like it. Continue plesae.

[HighwayUnicorn]

Oh yay! I was looking forward to you posting this.

I enjoyed that first chapter.

I hope you do continue with it.

Love Carina xxx

[isadora66]

Oh, it's good! I love the length of the sentences, nice fluency The different perspectives are interesting.

[Zetti]

Thanks guys I am so glad that you three like it. I will try and update for tomorrow.

Thanks again x

[biancaliamca]

got my hopes up then ;)

update soonn

millicent x

[Zetti]

Aww sorry millicent I will try and get an update up for tomorrow

[Zetti]

Sorry for the double post..

I will try and update tomorrow. Chapter is halfway there... just need a bit more.

Sorry to those who think that this is an update..

Edited December 9, 2010 by QUIET ACHIEVER
Removal of Sneak Peek/Teaser.

[HighwayUnicorn]

Oh man, thought it was an update as well.

xxx

Edited December 9, 2010 by QUIET ACHIEVER

[isadora66]

Whoot! Great chapter! The progress and dialogue seems realistic, a great plus. You're the best writer on Bianca/Liam fanfics right now, no doubt about it!

What is Vittorio up to? And how caught up in Xavier is April? I love unresolved questions.

Good job

[HighwayUnicorn]

Another brilliant chapter. Well done.

Great effort & I like the sound of the preview too.

Love Carina xxx