Adia Posted November 19, 2008 Report Share Posted November 19, 2008 Glad you are continuing ILM! I always read the latest chapters, but sometimes don't have much time to reply. Like everyone else has said - You're a great writer, and I know that there are a few people out there who are inspired by your writing! Can't wait to see the next chapter! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Corey Posted November 23, 2008 Report Share Posted November 23, 2008 Oh that was just beautiful, It took my breath away. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bareenfan Posted November 24, 2008 Report Share Posted November 24, 2008 Oh that was just beautiful, It took my breath away. I totally agree. That was beautifully written. Your characterization of little Irene is superb and I can see her in my head when I read so clearly because of how you have written her. The emotion and the relationships which you describe is also beautifully described and I felt every bit of it. I am all anticipation about Barry telling Kim. I shall be biting my nails before I even start to read I am sure. Well done, yet another fantastic chapter. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chatter box Posted November 27, 2008 Report Share Posted November 27, 2008 I looked in here on the off chance that you had written another chapter and was not disappointed. As ever this was very mature and excellent writing. I live every moment with them and it draws me in; and I adore 11 year old Irene. You understand emotions and human failings so well, not just the ordinary ones, but the complicated ones which screw up lives, such insight is a rare gift. I am looking forward to the next installment very much indeed, but I always do. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I love music Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 **sigh** Looks like I'm the only one reading this again. Nevermind, I'm going to bed. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I love music Posted December 28, 2008 Report Share Posted December 28, 2008 Well, I know I pretty much ran out of ideas as to how to remove Dani from the main body of the story and so had to ask you to suspend disbelief while Kirsty climbed the drainpipes but I was hoping somebody liked it. **shrugs** Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bareenfan Posted December 29, 2008 Report Share Posted December 29, 2008 I have been away over the holidays, and only just seen this. I like it. I always liked Dani, even though she was a spoiled little madam. I think I liked to dislike her if that makes any sense at all, and I liked the relationship with Rhys who was always so over protective it was a cliche. Poor Will, he does have the worst luck with women, and you have captured his emabrassment extremely well , and Dani's disdain at the end. It was always Gypsy with Will and I am glad you have kept it that way. I hope you had a good christmas. I look forward to reading some more as I always do. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Corey Posted December 30, 2008 Report Share Posted December 30, 2008 Happy Holidays ILM Will is one of the guys where the Y chromosome shows why guys are so deficient in so many ways sending a poem you wrote to the love of your life to the new girl, just to **** of the said love of your life, doh and double doh. Rhys always did sneer at all of the boys, I know now why I never liked him. I love Kirsty and Danni being so rebelious, and Danni is sooo much a Princess. I looooooooved Will and Gypsy, so they have to get together by the end please. Great Chapter , keep them coming. Please. :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zippy Posted January 1, 2009 Report Share Posted January 1, 2009 Excellent, a jolly good read. Dani and will always were a train crash. Good work Ms Music. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adia Posted January 10, 2009 Report Share Posted January 10, 2009 LOL! I loved the ending, but poor Will. Rhys always was quite protective of his family (and usually very over dramatic about it!) and you wrote him just as I remember him. I especially like the depth you are giving to Irene/Kim/Barry. The characters and their backgrounds are so intriguing and so emotional, and you truly write them with grace. It is starting to become my favourite part of the story. I literally gasped when Barry was like, "Right I'm going to tell him..." and Kim was in the doorway! Can't wait to see what happens next. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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