BillyK Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 Amazing Chapter. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I love music Posted August 10, 2008 Report Share Posted August 10, 2008 Thanks for your reviews. The next chapter should be ready in a couple of days *fingers crossed* And seeing as there have been 850!!! hits since the last chapter was posted I'll stop complaining no one's reading now... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I Love Sam Posted August 17, 2008 Report Share Posted August 17, 2008 I like the continuity between this and the previous chapters, it makes it flow well. Megan is a great character I like her a lot, and Kim is a lot more human the way you describe him than he sometimes was on screen. The vulnerable and soft side comes across really well. They way all of your chapters intertwine without losing the thread is really clever. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I love music Posted August 18, 2008 Report Share Posted August 18, 2008 I like the continuity between this and the previous chapters, it makes it flow well. Megan is a great character I like her a lot, and Kim is a lot more human the way you describe him than he sometimes was on screen. The vulnerable and soft side comes across really well. They way all of your chapters intertwine without losing the thread is really clever. Thanks. That was quite a difficult chapter to write as I don't know very much about Barry and Kim. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bareenfan Posted August 18, 2008 Report Share Posted August 18, 2008 That was very good, I like Megan she has an ethereal quality which is very endearing. You have made Kim more vulnerable than I remember him, which is a good thing I think. I'm looking forward to Cassie and Hayley and also to the Barry and Kim showdown, that should be phenomenal. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chatter box Posted August 22, 2008 Report Share Posted August 22, 2008 Yet another very mature and enjoyable chapter, which I found to be very effective. i am also looking forward to seeing how the Barry/Kim discussion goes. Well done, this is excellent writing, and I always look forward to what you have to say about the various characters, whoever they are. Megan is intriguing. Is she related to Floss by any chance? You have captured Kim in a very sympathetic way, as he wasn't always portrayed that way on screen. Its a fascinating character study. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I love music Posted August 23, 2008 Report Share Posted August 23, 2008 Yet another very mature and enjoyable chapter, which I found to be very effective. i am also looking forward to seeing how the Barry/Kim discussion goes. Well done, this is excellent writing, and I always look forward to what you have to say about the various characters, whoever they are. Megan is intriguing. Is she related to Floss by any chance? You have captured Kim in a very sympathetic way, as he wasn't always portrayed that way on screen. Its a fascinating character study. Nope, Megan is a direct descendant of Molly Scattergood who made herbal cures and told fortunes in seventeenth century England and of Edwin Henry Scattergood who was sent to Botany Bay in the nineteenth century - tho if Floss ever researches her family tree and discovers any Scattergoods or Ashcrofts she might well be... I think I'm taking all this a little bit too seriously now... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I Love Sam Posted August 23, 2008 Report Share Posted August 23, 2008 Well if half of Martha's rellies can look like the cast of Prisoner there is no reason why Floss cant be related to Megan Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I love music Posted September 14, 2008 Report Share Posted September 14, 2008 Going on hol for 2 weeks end of Sept so there will be a while till the next chapter. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bareenfan Posted September 15, 2008 Report Share Posted September 15, 2008 That was really thoughtful dedication ILM I am sure Frankie is still with is in spirit and is enjoying this as much as the rest of us. I enjoyed this, the ratcheting up of the emotions and the way Cassie gathers her courage was very well described and I was pleased that she stood up to Hayley at the end.I like how all of your chapters link together. Have a good holiday. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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