If There's Only One Side Fighting (by Jen) - comments

[HighwayUnicorn]

Awww, poor Aden

I look forward to more though. It's a brilliant start.

Well done, Jen. Amazing stuff.

Love Carina xxx

[bradyell]

Absolutely, completely, totally and utterly BRILLIANT!!

I'd like to say what i loved the best about it but heck...I'd have to just paste in the whole chapter!

LOVED it and really can't wait for more :D :D

[bradyell]

Wow! Seriously awesome stuff! I couldn't read that fast enough yet at the same time didn't want to get to the end!

What a complete Arse Larry is!!

Justin...well...even though he's hurting Aden he doesn't really want to so I can really sympathise with him. He wants a better life and who can blame him!

My hugs (They are in the Bradyell DNA!) are all for one person though....Aden He just needs a cuddle doesn't he...like a real proper big cuddle. Can't wait to read more to find out if he gets one!

BRILLIANT!

[HighwayUnicorn]

Wow, I dislike Larry!

Poor, poor Aden. I feel so sorry for him. Bless him.

I agree with Ellen. Aden needs a massive hug!

Well done & I look forward to more.

Love Carina xxx

[HighwayUnicorn]

I did read this earlier only I was on my phone so I couldn't really comment. It takes about four times as long to comment on there than it does now I'm home.

But that was an amazing chapter. I loved how you write Aden's emotions in that chapter. Just perfect.

This fanfiction is actually amazing & I am loving every single word of it, Jen, so seriously, well done. A great effort on that chapter as per usual.

& that last scene was just amazing. Well done.

Love Carina xxx

[bradyell]

Another chapter of awesomeness :D

My heart just goes out to Aden soooooooooo much! Whilst i could never see him and Belle together as a bad thing I hope that this little encounter leads to something more and doesn't just end up hurting him.

I can't wait for more

[HighwayUnicorn]

Loved that chapter! The speech, the emotions, everything.

I thought you wrote Belle & Aden's conversation perfectly.

Fantastic stuff as per. Well done.

Love Carina xxx

Edited January 17, 2011 by -Carina-

[kitkat1992]

Wow loving this...the conversation between Belle and Aden was really good

looking forward to more

[bradyell]

I'm running out of ways to say how AMAZING this fic is!!

I really love it Jen, honestly, i'd go as far as saying it's one of my faves ever!

Every emotion is just captured beautifuly and i just fall into it every time i read it.

really can't wait for more!!!

[bradyell]

*wipes away tears*

Perfect...just completely and utterly perfect.

Gutted that it's the end but a brilliant ending all the same.

My heart broke for Justin

Aden's "you're still my brother" line was just about the best thing he could say Perfect!

Thank you soooooo much for writing this fic!! I will be reading it again...lots!!!