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Finally managed to read the last few chapters. I'm sad it's over but I like the way you ended it. :D

It's nice that Jill also came to see her grandson and I like how you added a scene with Xavier and Tracey. I'm glad everything ended well and that Mink will be able to do her HSC. :D

I loved this part which is very true... :lol:

Mink was resting in bed.Xavier was sitting by their son’s crib, gazing down at him.“Have you thought about names for him?”he asked.

“I dunno.I was thinking…Flint?”

Xavier did a double take.“Is that a name?”

“He’s got parents called Mink and Xavier.He was never going to get one of the Top 10 Baby Names.”

Xavier thought it over.“Flint…Yeah, okay, I could get used to that.”

... and this part:

“Do you think he looks like me?”Miles asked as he carried Flint towards the door.

“Why would he look like you, you daft lummox?”Alf demanded.

“I thought all babies looked like me.”

Great fic as usual! :D

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