Barbara Posted September 14, 2010 Report Share Posted September 14, 2010 A new fic! Good start. Xavier and April came running out of the water, Xavier shaking himself dry as they did so.April shot him a look of mock indignation.“Do you mind not getting me wet?” “You’re already wet,”Xavier pointed out. “Yeah but I’m wet with my water, not your water.” Xavier thought that over for a moment.“That makes no sense.” April’s face was a picture of innocent.“Doesn’t it?” I love that part. I'm with Romeo. Mink's comments don't entirely reassure me. There's bound to be some drama if she is back. I like the mention of Jill. It's nice to know that she has been sober. More please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
superman's girlfriend Posted September 14, 2010 Report Share Posted September 14, 2010 Cool Red Ranger i hope they all become friends Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighwayUnicorn Posted September 14, 2010 Report Share Posted September 14, 2010 (edited) Deleted. Edited September 17, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted September 14, 2010 Report Share Posted September 14, 2010 Whooooppp!! Another fanfiction from RR1! Great start. Update soon xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chipsferryroxmisox Posted September 15, 2010 Report Share Posted September 15, 2010 This sounds like its gonna be a fantastical story Can't wait to hear more xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lino Posted September 15, 2010 Report Share Posted September 15, 2010 Great a Mink story. I loved Mink and wish she would come back. I always loved Mink and Xavier together. Brilliant start. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bobby Forever Missed Posted September 15, 2010 Report Share Posted September 15, 2010 Good start you are a very good writer! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tessalove Posted September 16, 2010 Report Share Posted September 16, 2010 Ohh this looks really good! Can't wait for more! El x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighwayUnicorn Posted September 18, 2010 Report Share Posted September 18, 2010 (edited) Deleted. Edited September 17, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lino Posted September 18, 2010 Report Share Posted September 18, 2010 I loved the introduction of Mink to the friends. And Xavier reaction was very well written. Thank you for the update, and i hope for more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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