Just the Once (by Red Ranger 1) - comments

[Barbara]

A new fic! Good start.

Xavier and April came running out of the water, Xavier shaking himself dry as they did so.April shot him a look of mock indignation.“Do you mind not getting me wet?”

“You’re already wet,”Xavier pointed out.

“Yeah but I’m wet with my water, not your water.”

Xavier thought that over for a moment.“That makes no sense.”

April’s face was a picture of innocent.“Doesn’t it?”

I love that part.

I'm with Romeo. Mink's comments don't entirely reassure me. There's bound to be some drama if she is back. I like the mention of Jill. It's nice to know that she has been sober.

More please.

[superman's girlfriend]

Cool Red Ranger i hope they all become friends

[HighwayUnicorn]

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Edited September 17, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn

[Inactive User]

Whooooppp!! Another fanfiction from RR1! Great start. Update soon xx

[Chipsferryroxmisox]

This sounds like its gonna be a fantastical story

Can't wait to hear more xx

[lino]

Great a Mink story. I loved Mink and wish she would come back. I always loved Mink and Xavier together.

Brilliant start.

[Bobby Forever Missed]

Good start you are a very good writer!

[tessalove]

Ohh this looks really good!

Can't wait for more! El x

[HighwayUnicorn]

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Edited September 17, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn

[lino]

I loved the introduction of Mink to the friends. And Xavier reaction was very well written. Thank you for the update, and i hope for more.