White Christmas (by bradyell) - comments

[HighwayUnicorn]

Oooooooooh! The sexual chemistry between Belle & Aden is just

Although I don't know if I could tease Aden for that long. I would have to just get straight in there to be honest.

Aden is just too ... wow. Perfect.

I don't know how you do it Ellen but you write perfectly.

I loved every single scene in that part.

& how you wrote Belle & Aden's relationship was just amazing.

I loved every word of it.

Well done.

I look forward to the next part.

Love Carina xxx

EDIT: How typical of Colleen! Mentioning about Belle's hospital visits! Although it did make me laugh.

Edited December 1, 2010 by -Carina-

[xknomex]

love love love love love love love love love love love love love love looooooove it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

its so fluffy, like serious serious fluff! its like the light fluffy snow falling outside right now (eek)

"his muscles in his arms flexed as he pulled one in each hand back up the sand to the stand just in front of the shop" :ph34r:

CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE!

and aren't you glad we twisted your arm ;)

[hitmanfan]

:D

You loved writing it so it wasn't really arm twisting, just positive prompting

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh that was, just ....

can't wait for the snowwy part - now if we also beg for what happens when they get home (if you've not already written that part ) can we have that as an outtake!!!

Pretty please, I'll get on my knees and beg if it helps

Just brilliant

(edit - stupid positing restrictions on emoticons! )

[hitmanfan]

:D

that was fantastic!!!!!

THANK YOU Ellen

and you do know that now they have decided for a baby, there is the oportunity for you to write more cute Adelle babies

Edited December 4, 2010 by hitmanfan

[kitkat1992]

that was amazing...I loved it.

It's just a shame it was only two parts long...I would have loved to have read more

[HighwayUnicorn]

*Sighs*

I would be happy with Aden for christmas but to have Aden & his baby? Even better!

Seriously, that was just amazing.

I loved everything about it! It was just so beautifully written as always. You always write brilliantly, Ellen.

All the references were just amazing. I loved the ski lessons, the snow, the emotions, the romance.

To be honest, I couldn't find fault. I loved everything. I can't think of anything I didn't like in that second part.

& a baby! Awww, an Adelle baby. What could be better?!

A great second part & I loved it. Well done Ellen.

Love Carina xxx