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Liked that update.

I think its a good idea for Nicole to get away because its important she stays safe. At least I hope she is going to be safe now.

Update soon :)

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Sorry I meant to comment on the previous chapter but I wasn't quick enough :lol: my favourite bit was the Tony/Aden chat, that was just fantastic. Really well written, heartfelt and honest. I love Tony's fatherly role with Aden and his little reminiscence over Kate, Beth and his feelings for Rachel were written really lovely.

You wrote this second chapter really well to; the shock and build up to Charlie realising it was her Dad was brilliantly done. Look forward to an update :)

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Shocking ending! I hope this person isn't after Aden! I wonder who rang him?

Mm can't wait for more!

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Great couple of updates. I really liked the Sally/Nicole and Tony/Aden chats. Especially the Tony/Aden one. It was really well written.

Aww loved Nicole with the kids, cute!

And then the endind when Charlie realised about her Dad. :(

It was a shocking ending, I wasnt expecting that!

Wonder who called Aden.....

Cant wait for more!

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