charmed60 Posted August 15, 2010 Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 That was a beautiful chapter! The whole conversation with Nicole and Aden was written perfectly and I'm pleased Nicole has been able to cope with the fact he can't say those words to her; hopefully one day he can. Look forward to the next update Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted August 15, 2010 Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 Great chapter. Liked it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kitkat1992 Posted August 18, 2010 Report Share Posted August 18, 2010 That was such a good story, I love how even through all the sadness Nicole and Aden could still be happy. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tessalove Posted August 19, 2010 Report Share Posted August 19, 2010 That was so sweet! I really loved the whole thing! Great fic! Elxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danni02 Posted August 19, 2010 Report Share Posted August 19, 2010 I think its really sad that Aden cant tell Nicole that he loves her. I really feel for Nicole, but luckily for him she seems to be able to accept it. Oh well. Liked them all visiting Roman's grave at the end. Really enjoyed this! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barbara Posted August 19, 2010 Report Share Posted August 19, 2010 I'm sad the fic is over but that end was so sweet and perfect! It's good to know they're still together, happy and doing something with their lives. It was a great fic and I enjoyed every chapter! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted August 20, 2010 Report Share Posted August 20, 2010 Huge thanks to everyone who commented on this fiction.Reading your comments and knowing that people are enjoying the story and thinking about it really helps me keep going.Thanks to everyone who read it but didn't leave a comment:Increased view count helps as well. I'm sorry if anyone was disappointed that Aden didn't tell Nicole he loved her but I felt it would be too simplistic for him to suddenly say the words after having had difficulty in the past, so I tried to show that the feelings were there even if the words weren't.(Did he tell her one day?Well, I think he did but I guess that one's up to the individual reader...) Free plug:Anyone who was intrigued by the idea of Aden and Ruby together might like to check out the fiction Family Matters by the same author.Just try not to laugh too much at the line that's rather unfortunate in retrospect... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighwayUnicorn Posted August 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 20, 2010 (edited) Deleted. Edited September 17, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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