HighwayUnicorn Posted June 22, 2010 Report Posted June 22, 2010 (edited) Deleted. Edited September 14, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn Quote
Danni02 Posted June 22, 2010 Report Posted June 22, 2010 (edited) Good start. Loved Miles' banter Like Aden and Roman's talk aswell. Looking forward to seeing Nicole's reaction to Aden turing up and Roman too as I'm guessing she didnt know he had day release from her conversation with Miles? Update soon Edited June 22, 2010 by Danni02 Quote
charmed60 Posted June 22, 2010 Report Posted June 22, 2010 This is brilliant. Absolutely loved Miles in the first little bit; he acted like such a proud father And I can't believe Roman is back! So excited to see how Nicole reacts! Also loved the comment about Roman not being blind this time. Quote
tessalove Posted June 23, 2010 Report Posted June 23, 2010 Really good start! I think I'm really going to like this! You wrote the first part really well, I loved Miles! Can't wait for more! El x Quote
Barbara Posted June 23, 2010 Report Posted June 23, 2010 “But nothing!I’m going to be cheering and applauding and whistling and taking photos at inappropriate moments and embarrassing the hell out of you.Trust me, it will be just like having a mother, father, drunken uncle and senile grandfather all rolled into one.” Miles! I loved him in that first part. He's more excited about it all then Romeo and Nicole are. That's going to be a big surpise for Nicole! Her dad and her ex-boyfriend showing up at her graduation.... I'm sure she'll be thrilled to see her dad but I wonder how she'll react to Aden's presence. More please. Quote
kitkat1992 Posted June 24, 2010 Report Posted June 24, 2010 great chapter... i wasn't expecting that ending at all. Can't wait for the next update Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted June 25, 2010 Author Report Posted June 25, 2010 (edited) Deleted. Edited September 14, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn Quote
bradyell Posted June 25, 2010 Report Posted June 25, 2010 Wow this is good!! You have all the characters bang on, especially Miles! Am loving him Nooooooooooooooooooooooo though!! Roman!!! I have a feeling this is gonna have us on the edge of our seats! Can't wait for more Quote
Danni02 Posted June 25, 2010 Report Posted June 25, 2010 Loved Miles, once again. Roman wow, I certainly wasnt expecting that. Cant wait for more Quote
tessalove Posted June 25, 2010 Report Posted June 25, 2010 That chapter started out so sweet and nice, I loved the reunion everyone seemed to happy! but Poor Roman, I can't believe that happened, Wonder how Nic will cope! I hope Aden stays around for her! The emotions were written so well! Great update! Update soon! Elx Quote
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