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Good start.

Loved Miles' banter :lol:

Like Aden and Roman's talk aswell. Looking forward to seeing Nicole's reaction to Aden turing up and Roman too as I'm guessing she didnt know he had day release from her conversation with Miles? :unsure:

Update soon :)

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This is brilliant. Absolutely loved Miles in the first little bit; he acted like such a proud father :lol: And I can't believe Roman is back! So excited to see how Nicole reacts! Also loved the comment about Roman not being blind this time.

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Really good start! :)

I think I'm really going to like this! You wrote the first part really well, I loved Miles! :)

Can't wait for more! El x

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“But nothing!I’m going to be cheering and applauding and whistling and taking photos at inappropriate moments and embarrassing the hell out of you.Trust me, it will be just like having a mother, father, drunken uncle and senile grandfather all rolled into one.”

Miles! :lol: I loved him in that first part. He's more excited about it all then Romeo and Nicole are.

That's going to be a big surpise for Nicole! Her dad and her ex-boyfriend showing up at her graduation.... I'm sure she'll be thrilled to see her dad but I wonder how she'll react to Aden's presence.

More please. :D

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Wow this is good!! You have all the characters bang on, especially Miles! Am loving him :D

Nooooooooooooooooooooooo though!! Roman!!! :(:(

I have a feeling this is gonna have us on the edge of our seats!

Can't wait for more :D

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That chapter started out so sweet and nice, I loved the reunion everyone seemed to happy! :)

but Poor Roman, I can't believe that happened, Wonder how Nic will cope! I hope Aden stays around for her!

The emotions were written so well! Great update!

Update soon! Elx

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