Inactive User Posted June 20, 2010 Report Posted June 20, 2010 Great chapter Glad Nicole and Ruby sorted things out Pray Ruby had let go of her feelings for Geoff now Charlie and the children in danger?? Hope Angelo better get there in time to save them and Morag More soon please Quote
carywary Posted June 20, 2010 Report Posted June 20, 2010 Wow Danni that was amazing, I think it's my favourite chapter yet I loved the way things worked out between Ruby and Nicole and I could really feel the tension as I was reading it, I hope that Ruby and Geoff can be friends again or it will be hard for Ruby and Nicole. And poor Charlie, I'm sure that morning sickness is the last thing she needs, and I'm so excited to see what James is planning next, but I hope Angelo gets home in time to protect Charlie and the baby and the others maybe this will make Charlie realise that she really is excited for another baby, and it could bring her and Angelo closer cos they've been a bit distant lately I think, like the way he hasn't realised she isn't excited about the baby. Ok I'm gonna stop cos I could write pages it was so brilliant! Keep it up! Quote
freckleface Posted June 21, 2010 Report Posted June 21, 2010 That was really good! I'm glad Ruby and Nic made things up, they're right, it wasnt worth falling out over. I want to know whats going to happen! Brilliant cliffhanger! More Soon please Quote
callyha Posted June 21, 2010 Report Posted June 21, 2010 WOW! Amazing last part! Funny and serious! Great chapter. Hope Morag doesn't get hurt Glad Ruby and Nicole made up! Whats wrong with Charlie? More soon please Quote
Barbara Posted June 22, 2010 Report Posted June 22, 2010 Thankfully Nicole and Ruby made up. And Nicole and Geoff are okay too. That's great! Angelo and Jack'd better hurry up and go to Morag's house before James hurts Charlie and the kids. You had to leave it there. More please. Quote
charlie29 Posted June 22, 2010 Report Posted June 22, 2010 ooooh its getting exciting!!! Hope Jack and Angelo find James before he can hurt Charlie or the kids.....or Morag lol! Please continue soon Quote
Hannah-K Posted June 22, 2010 Report Posted June 22, 2010 i'm glad ruby and nicole made up. that was such a good cliff hanger. i cant wait to read more and to see what happens. Quote
twinkletoesjess Posted June 24, 2010 Author Report Posted June 24, 2010 Since I have only just managed to get caught up with your fic I am going to comment on all the chapters that I had missed in one comment. Chapter Five I really liked this chapter. Ava is really cute getting all worried that her mummy and daddy might start living in different houses. Im glad Charlie reasured her that that was not going to happen. Im glad Ruby has realised that her drinking all the time is affecting Changelo and ow she has decided to be responsible and look after Callum properly. Chapter Six "Granny Morag runs a tight ship" That just made me laugh loads. I really glad that Charlie and Angelo are talking about things and that Angelo has started to help out with Callum. Chapter Seven I liked that Ruby thanked Charlie for everything that she has being doing. I loved that Angelo tried to make things right with Ben by taking him on a guys day out fishing. I loved Ruby's and Charlies talk at the end. Chapter Eight "But Daddy caught a big one." Ben is really cute. Glad Angelo told Charlie the truth and that he wasnt cheating on her like she thought. Great Cliffhanger you left us on. Chapter Nine This was another great chapter. I loved that Charlie risked her life to go back into the house after angelo. Charlie was really brave. I hope she is alright. Chapter Ten Im glad Angelo managed to rescue Charlie. Princes Jessica, aww she is cute. You always manage to write cute kids. Aww the end was really lovely, Ava missing her mum. Chapter Eleven I can understand why Charlie is worried about Ruby living with Nicole and Geoff but Ruby is right she does have Nic to help if needed. Awww Charlie doesnt want Angelo to see her burns. Chapter Twelve Oh no I hope nothing happens between Ruby and Geoff. Awww Angelos reaction to the burns were perfect. I loved that he kissed the burn, was really sweet. Chapter Thirteen I dont know whether its a good thing not telling Nic what happened,but at the same time i dont know what good telling her would do either. Aww how cute was ava and ben when they were talking about school. I loved Charlie and Ruby's talk wish we had more of that on the show. Chapter Fourteen Ooh i wonder who the mystery man is, I think I might have an idea but im not too sure. Charlie is pregnant again but not happy about it, Oh dear that argument was intense. Chapter Fifteen Nicole telling Changelo all about her daughters needs just made me laugh. Seems that we have one little diva in the making. Angelo trying to change a nappy was funny too and I loved how you had charlie tell him her decision about the baby. Chapter Sixteen Oohh Ruby put her foot in it just a little bit, I cant believe Nicole kicked her out though. I love it when Angelo gets all protective. Go away James Chapter Seventeen Charlie still isnt excited about the baby I can see why she doesnt want to tell angelo though. Another great mother/daughter talk, your really good at writing them . Ava sure does ask a lot of questions she would make a great police woman. Chapter Eighteen Glad ruby and Nicole have sorted things out. You cant just leave it there I hope everyone will be okay and that Angelo and Jack get there in time. Quote
Rach Loves H&A Posted June 25, 2010 Report Posted June 25, 2010 Great Update Hope everything is okay with Charlie, looking forward to your next update. Quote
lilprincess Posted June 25, 2010 Report Posted June 25, 2010 I love this fanfiction its brill Cant wait 2 find out what happens next Quote
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